San Diego Martian Lapses

you slip scripts into wack audiences so you can get on tool time,
and even with a twenty dollah mic dis foo is poo, couldn't rhyme.
you smell like lime, i'm lemons, my rhymes make you pinch your cheeks,
like grandmas in b-ball cleats, you beat games with seesaw cheats.
i hide and seek life you peek because we all know you're so weak,
you think lame verses are a feat, i'll pound you with a hammer just
to tenderize fresh meat(ya feel the heat?)
i'm neat and tidy, you're unclean and wash your clothes with Tide,
but even in an ocean of motion the sun's watch ain't telling time.

A perfect example of a maddrapper verse. Do I have the 'attitude' you're talking about? The unplayed dope punches and the wordplay out the ass, madd?

TROOP your rhyme affair lame like a bad airplane you
Can’t take off you fake and soft like sponge cake I’ll slew
You like Cain done Abel rhymes are plain and unstable no class
Need change for a dollar while I rearrange your collar fast
Pollute your scheme and trends like disputes between friends
Nobody wins this settlement, eat fruit drink Jim Beam and gins
TROOP you a slut loco need a true cup of coco I really suggest
You call Nestles Quick because my mess is sick, your style get molest
Your beckoning gestures is wrecking textures like a bad hair do
You write false and you like white sauce don’t spread on bread true
Somebody misled you like General Custer at Little Big Horn
You getting slaughtered need a rope to secure your quotes scorned
Even with pure soap you couldn’t clean that trash you write no adorn
In that, you soft with pudding feet no wooden cleat so how can you run
Dunn? You’ll fall on your face all a disgrace to Hip Hop just a bum

Compare them. Man, reading both I can't even remember which verse is mine. Man, maddrapper got some mad talent because that shit was so hard it was a minute freestyle. Looking back, I even fucking did it better then maddrapper does! At least my rhymes are about the same length and shit.

your cuckoo like cocoa puffs and write such gay ass stuff,
you drop dime rhymes and take steroids, think you're tough
enough, im almost done smacking this wack cat's frown life,
your soul is mine, i'm sue tsung, and i'll wreck your lifes nine
dont hide, i cap u like coke, make you choke like bonnie n clyde.
i sip wine and you sip coolaid, broke a hip, come to the fool's aid.
i didnt learn form what my school made, and i stole kids whole change.

YEAH! Another pimp maddrapper freestyle!

this cat is having a dream that he can rap like MADDRAPPER look at him HA1 HA! HA! HA!

you're just a hatah foo. u know i'm the king of rapverse. i got more atitude then ull ever have. maddrapper or catraper? hahaha. werdage.

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=202494

really man u is wack better pick up the slack or ull get gat attacked, fool. i drown you in a pool and im so cool i burn down schools wit clam chowder, and rap like im on mount howard.

THey both whack....Kein...stick to topicals.

No hate...just my opinion....

man u is hatin
what u talkin bout foo
im better then madd
and im just playing his game
foo wont admit it
got shit on me foo