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Old 07-23-05, 04:45 PM   #1
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u can never kill me.

I am the motion of the mighty river,
I have taken, I am the giver, made a sir of a nigger,
I am rhythm and rhyme, I keep u dancin',
took some thugz lives away and put others in mansions,
I have no race but the one to the top,
I answer to no preacher, politician, or cop,
I am the vision of your fore fathers and the dream of your youth,
I'm on your block, on your t.v., and in a booth,
I spread hate, love, truth, and lie,
I bring down a people, but sometimes I help to open their eyez,
I've been broke, I've also had a waiter on call,
I am life and have lived it, whether "Biggie" or "Small",
I'm garbage to some, and to some I'm music,
I'm genius, and the ability to use it,
I'm beef on the streets, both a riff and a crack,
but when I'm truly understood you'll see I'm bigger than that.

-Chip
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Old 07-23-05, 04:46 PM   #2
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Old 07-23-05, 04:49 PM   #3
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u can never kill me.

I am the motion of the mighty river,
I have taken, I am the giver, made a sir of a nigger,
I am rhythm and rhyme, I keep u dancin',
took some thugz lives away and put others in mansions,
I have no race but the one to the top,
I answer to no preacher, politician, or cop,
I am the vision of your fore fathers and the dream of your youth,
I'm on your block, on your t.v., and in a booth,
I spread hate, love, truth, and lie,
I bring down a people, but sometimes I help to open their eyez,
I've been broke, I've also had a waiter on call,
I am life and have lived it, whether "Biggie" or "Small",
I'm garbage to some, and to some I'm music,
I'm genius, and the ability to use it,

I'm beef on the streets, both a riff and a crack,
but when I'm truly understood you'll see I'm bigger than that.

-Chip


nice topic, flow and structure were off here and there but thats easily fixed, and the lines in bold are my favourite! peace!
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Old 07-23-05, 05:08 PM   #4
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