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Check in by: 07-20-05 at 06:48 AM

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Souljah has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-17-05 06:50 AM.

Captain D has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-17-05 06:55 AM.

Quick 8 lines

I'll shatter your flow like a baseball bat to the kneepcaps
Lyrically your flow couldn't shine and mantain............
.......................and stay strong if i buffed your rhyme book with bees wax
Think you'll beat me, nigga must be jokin or tokin
Your punches miss and like Lil Kim...................................
...........and Monica Lewinsky's legs you're left wide open
Lyrically you're a disgrace to the art of spittin,
Like a fight between Stevie Wonder and Ray Charles............
..........you'd win the lottery before any of your punches started hittin
You know what its a good thing you didn't create no hype
Cos you couldn't win if i broke my hands and tried to type....

Souljah you better back down before I turn in to Fifty

and grab my gat and pop your ass down

Fuck that nigga didn't back down

now I got Souljah R.I.P. up on my chest now

I'm sorry for what I did but i like Eazy-E I'm straight gangsta with this

but nigga u won dis shit I'm better at wrightin with words then fightin with words

shit sorry nigga thought I'D be better can't think and hate typin so lot better at audio

Voted For: Souljah

soulja gets my vote.
this verse had alot more thought than captains.
i really didnt care for either verse,but you had punches and structure. 100

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Voted For: Souljah

well do i really have to sit down here and explain my vote . . cause i think thats bull shit . Captain D didn't drop anything at all he even admitted . . . so my votes has to got to souljah by default

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just like the smilie says . . . can u spit . . . or u just gonna make me laff

Voted For: Souljah

Peace to both emcees!!!

Souljah definitely got this one!
Punches were harder = "Lyrically you're a disgrace to the art of spittin,
Like a fight between Stevie Wonder and Ray Charles............
..........you'd win the lottery before any of your punches started hittin"

Structure needs improvement!

Captain D
Your structure was better and easier to read than Souljahs but your punches were not on fam! You need to work on your punches. Try different things to like metaphors, similies, and other techniques.

My vote this time is with Souljah!

Peace to both emcees!

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Barz&Penstripes Music

ok uppin this shit..................................

Voted For: Souljah


lol can we say alias fuckin with ppl lol this is a waste of time
Souljah you better back down before I turn in to Fifty
alrite u had no lkine to rhyme lol ur punch was gay no personal blah 2/10

and grab my gat and pop your ass down

Fuck that nigga didn't back down
lol wack again who is this no punch here

now I got Souljah R.I.P. up on my chest now
lol no line to rhyme again but hey wahtever no personal neither 1/10

I'm sorry for what I did but i like Eazy-E I'm straight gangsta with this

but nigga u won dis shit I'm better at wrightin with words then fightin with words

shit sorry nigga thought I'D be better can't think and hate typin so lot better at audiowell none of ur lines rhyme work on ur flow vocab structure punches creativity and metaphores and stop fuckin with new bs lol

I'll shatter your flow like a baseball bat to the kneepcaps
Lyrically your flow couldn't shine and mantain............
.......................and stay strong if i buffed your rhyme book
with bees wax
lol this line was played and wack and the filler omg work on ur structure stop tryin to make it look like ur line isnt stretched as hell lol 5/10
Think you'll beat me, nigga must be jokin or tokin
Your punches miss and like Lil Kim...................................
...........and Monica Lewinsky's legs you're left wide open
played and corny work on ur creativeness 6/10
Lyrically you're a disgrace to the art of spittin,
Like a fight between Stevie Wonder and Ray Charles............
..........you'd win the lottery before any of your punches started hittin
wack loto lines played blah one of ur better ones though 6/10
You know what its a good thing you didn't create no hype
Cos you couldn't win if i broke my hands and tried to type....
played and wack
u need to work on ur flow its off because of ur fucked structure work on ur vocab and u didnt have one personal lol but whatever its obvious y i say u win

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