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Old 07-24-05, 07:03 PM   #1
Dervla
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Cry Little Sister

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Cry Little sister by Lola Cruez


Cry Little sister
Cry to your Brother
Cry little sister
Run To your brother

Thou shall not fall
Thou shall not weap
Thou shall not fear
Thou shall not fall

Walking on the road of life
in the darkness
I weap,without grasping
your hand
Fears crept in my viens
Devils starts to Plan
thier scheme
This Loniness is killing
me
Darts of Evil Hits starts to come
I can't no longer
Dodge them no more
Beneath my feets the road
starts to crumble
MY heart beating so out of
Control.
Fingers holding on the cliff
Of Life.
Sweats starts to ponder out
of my pores
WHERE ARE YOU!?
I lose handle of life
then i fall
fall
In to the darkness.
I Land but my body is
weak, and in agony
of pain
I can't get up so I lay
there weaping In tears
Soil of the ground
absorbs them.
Laughters I hear Laughters
They surround me
With thier hate.
I scream and scream
WHERE ARE YOU!?


Cry Little sister
Cry to your Brother
Cry little sister
Run To your brother

Thou shall not fall
Thou shall not weap
Thou shall not fear
Thou shall not fall

That Voice I hear
Scream I hear
Through Broken Walls
It's so Clear In my ears
Quickly as I can be
I run and run
to you
There you lay weaping
In tears
Devils around you.
I pushed them
My arms clenched around
your waist
My wings closing on us
Making us looking like an
Cocoon.
Our Resemble souls now
attatch.
Now I'm protecting you
your fears
your heart
Your soul
Cry no more.
We Both Fly Up.
Mornful cries
I hear below, because
They didnt take my
sisters soul
I put you back on the path
with full of light.
I walk with you Grasp in my
hands As we both walk
along the road Of
Life


Cry Little sister
Cry to your Brother
Cry little sister
Run To your brother

Thou shall not fall
Thou shall not weap
Thou shall not fear
Thou shall not fall



Remember Dead or Alive, I'm there with you...Protecting you, With my wings, REAL love is with me..Your brother.-Jake Cruez

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ITawAPuddyKat: Yeah, I guess. But I won't be a Lesbo for life.
Smartone Freal: oh so u DO have plans of turnin str8
ITawAPuddyKat: Well Yes, Yes I do.
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ITawAPuddyKat: Lol, all smiles aren't we? Lol
Smartone Freal: lol yea i cant hide what i think bout u
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ITawAPuddyKat: ...Oh, what DO you think about me? Lol
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Old 07-24-05, 07:39 PM   #2
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nice i really liked it cry little sister lol i might do a remix(CRY BITCH CRY) lol i liked this very long piece i liked the beginnning it was good nothing bad to sya about it keep on the good word 2 thumbs up
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Old 07-24-05, 07:54 PM   #3
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I liked it.....it was simple but conveyed emotion an ya message clearly.....u could tell it was from the heart...I woulda liked it if u got added a lil more depth to it but its still a really good piece...I def enjoyed reading it....keep it up ma..stay up.......1
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Old 07-25-05, 06:50 AM   #4
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Ahh Thanx.........
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ITawAPuddyKat: Yeah, I guess. But I won't be a Lesbo for life.
Smartone Freal: oh so u DO have plans of turnin str8
ITawAPuddyKat: Well Yes, Yes I do.
Smartone Freal:
ITawAPuddyKat: Lol, all smiles aren't we? Lol
Smartone Freal: lol yea i cant hide what i think bout u
Smartone Freal:
ITawAPuddyKat: ...Oh, what DO you think about me? Lol
Smartone Freal: lol sorry thats private
ITawAPuddyKat: EWWWWWWW..*Sigged*
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Old 07-28-05, 01:00 PM   #5
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Uppo.................
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mystery Is a Freak!!

ITawAPuddyKat: Yeah, I guess. But I won't be a Lesbo for life.
Smartone Freal: oh so u DO have plans of turnin str8
ITawAPuddyKat: Well Yes, Yes I do.
Smartone Freal:
ITawAPuddyKat: Lol, all smiles aren't we? Lol
Smartone Freal: lol yea i cant hide what i think bout u
Smartone Freal:
ITawAPuddyKat: ...Oh, what DO you think about me? Lol
Smartone Freal: lol sorry thats private
ITawAPuddyKat: EWWWWWWW..*Sigged*
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Old 08-02-05, 03:51 PM   #6
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mystery Is a Freak!!

ITawAPuddyKat: Yeah, I guess. But I won't be a Lesbo for life.
Smartone Freal: oh so u DO have plans of turnin str8
ITawAPuddyKat: Well Yes, Yes I do.
Smartone Freal:
ITawAPuddyKat: Lol, all smiles aren't we? Lol
Smartone Freal: lol yea i cant hide what i think bout u
Smartone Freal:
ITawAPuddyKat: ...Oh, what DO you think about me? Lol
Smartone Freal: lol sorry thats private
ITawAPuddyKat: EWWWWWWW..*Sigged*
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