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Old 07-16-05, 11:09 PM   #1
tha prophecy
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Aint No Love, Next Generation, and Cracks

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well people....check the tracks....its just three...


Soundclick:Forsaken Prophecy


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Old 07-17-05, 12:17 AM   #2
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Ain't No Love - You need a little help with your quality. I liked the song, but if you tweaked your quality a little it would be a lot better. Your flow sounded a little forced, like you were forcing yourself to rap slower......next time try a faster beat, I think it would suit you better. Keep droppin em
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Old 07-17-05, 01:55 AM   #3
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thanks for the feedback keep it coming....
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Old 07-17-05, 11:02 AM   #4
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come on people dont sleep
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Old 07-18-05, 05:31 PM   #5
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uppin this thread will RTF
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Old 07-18-05, 06:35 PM   #6
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flows dope...beats are aight could be better...vioce is straight....beats dope...7.5/10 RTF on "Still Incomplete"
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Old 07-21-05, 12:06 PM   #7
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listened to AIN'T NO LOVE

isn't this a Jay Z beat


ummm

watch the "P" words in that mic dawg...phew


I agree with enygma...flow seems forced...kinda choppy in that u sounded uncomfortable


u coulda ripped this beat and u didn't


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Old 07-21-05, 12:27 PM   #8
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thanks for the feedback at least this site leaves some feed.....
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Old 07-22-05, 02:56 PM   #9
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can i get some feedback people...
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Old 07-28-05, 09:36 AM   #10
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come on man...need some feedback...
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