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Old 07-28-05, 08:50 PM   #1
knaledg1
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Exclamation Freestyle diss to MarvJay (1st verse to fuck MarvJay wit' One Mic)

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Crack addict, weak habit, want static, can't have it,
I'll hurt yer' ass bad wrap yer' body in plastic,
Hea we go just ready to flow on this fuckin' wussy, (wussy)
Talkin' shit but really he just pussy, (pussy)
Don't push me.. Ova tha edge I ain't playin',
I'm just slayin' you inside of yer' head,
Wha'chu you think fuckin' wit' me I'm on tha brink,
Leavin' you more lost than Zelda lookin' fo' link,
You ain't nada in this Verse and yer' rhymes tha worst,
I'll snipe you like Beltway...... in one burst,
I'll hurt any cat who diss me and One Mic,
So take advise Marv don't run towards tha light,
You's a hype who's mad that yer' verses ain't raw,
Yo, Mic, help em up so I can help him crumble and fall.

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Old 07-28-05, 08:51 PM   #2
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Old 07-28-05, 11:58 PM   #3
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Shit was whack dawg......Marv wouldn't even bother writing something to respnd to it.He might free a couple lines but that it.Cause you don't pose a legitamate threat.He's better than you.Go elevate.You need some wordplay and metas and try to get some heavy personals.Until...don't fuck with Marv yet.
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Old 07-29-05, 06:47 AM   #4
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wtf^^^, i thort this woz pretty gud actually K, you had a nice flow to it. imma work on my verse aswell...
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Old 07-29-05, 10:34 AM   #5
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wow.......too basic that what it wuz....yea nice multi's but knowin Marv he's not gonna bother.........but as far as your peice goes this wuz pretty good
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Old 07-30-05, 12:08 AM   #6
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lol nah ima real mc im gonna respond.......
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Old 07-30-05, 05:23 PM   #7
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Go ahead Marv, I'm up fo a friendly lyrical war.
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Old 07-30-05, 06:23 PM   #8
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Quote:
Originally Posted by .Merkage.
wow..but knowin Marv he's not gonna bother...


^^^I think you gotta lil shit on ur nose....Ass Kissin muthafucka!^^^

Do you even know that nigga...Really?
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Old 08-02-05, 12:27 AM   #9
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^^ lol word.....it was ok but u could dissed him better man keep trying and u could maybe pose a threat to him
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Old 08-05-05, 10:46 PM   #10
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.......anyways homie elevate.....i know some special ed niggas can make better disses that that homie so bring it up......but u tryin though so keep it up
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Old 08-06-05, 07:38 PM   #12
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^word.

Hea we go just ready to flow on this fuckin' wussy, (wussy)
Talkin' shit but really he just pussy, (pussy)

I mean...

wow.
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