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08-04-05, 10:10 AM
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We Laugh..We Luv..We Cry
IP: 8A05 210E
....diz is heat here it'z worth tha h.o.f 4 poetry fa sho....
though we have never physically met..i've seen ya face a thousand times... ya voice is as clear to me as looking tho a pure diamond.. your the peace in my time of war... emotionally you are everything i need.. spirtually...you take my mind an soul to places their never been.. almost like a fairy tale..i chase you.. never being able to obtain you..i try harder.. WE LAUGH...WE LOVE..WE CRY... but thats all we're destined to do together.. soulmates seperated by nothing more than one being compelled to do the impossible.. an the other one..ignoring thier feelings an being impossible.. i want to hear ya stories..when your in pain- i want to be the shoudler you cry on.. i want to be the one that makes you laugh an smile.. in times of distress..i want to be the arms of the one your running to.. wiping away ya tears. we both know it could happen..yet we fear different things for different reasons.. YOU --- ME--- together on the wings of love we could escape our pains.. look down upon the peons that scorn us..break the chains of the false reality that bonds us.. instead of simply giving up on something that is much to special..A GIFT!!! people wait thier whole lives for it..an in one day we found it.. i wish to kiss you.. hold you..make love to you ..til ya legs quiver as i lick every drop of the sweetness ya body eludes.. wake up to your face in the morning..smiling upon the wingless angel thats fallen into my bed.. but til then..WE LAUGH ..WE LOVE..AN WE CRY...
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08-10-05, 06:15 PM
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<<-Carpe Noctum->>
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IP: 3240 794D
wow, solid poem payn, this piece has a lot of emotion, good vocabulary, and it was written well, stay up.1
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