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Old 08-01-05, 07:21 AM   #1
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raw version of song.......coming soon in audio........

plz leave some feed........


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Fuck…I keep walking and hit every people on street but no one want fight me,
Feeling failed like mailman brings newspaper and dog didn’t bite it.
My bad aunt, and Uncle Ronnie I am sorry, I couldn’t stop cussing,
And feels like umbrella when rain didn’t fall on me,
And my parents failed because they couldn’t train me.
So I can’t handle if some1 diss and start bite me,
I fucking kick his ass get pen and start writing.
Mic fight, and those moments feels like World turn too fast and slide under me.
And I can’t stand of those robbers whose want to rob old gash station,
Not even gash in tanks, and their must mention it.
And fuck parents friendship, when they broke up they have to stay off,
Because that thing pisses me off and im so cock that I shoot their brains off.
Fucking retard kids, fucking transsexual bitch,
That’s what happened when Adam and Eva get mated up.
And fuck those dads and moms whose never stop make those kids to this block.
What are they? Fucking Muslims whose didn’t use condom cause they have old socks.
You old fucks! Fuck im getting enough, when this World quit this?
I led it spin up. But I jump off, cause if I don’t my fucking head get pop off,
Or if those bitches trying stop me I fucking chop those heads off,
With old chainsaw, fuck them ass and eat them brains off.
Im fucking cannibal, even without eating peoples I fucking make shit radical.
Cause fuck those peoples get sink me bottom to grave of Marian.
And under water I fucking burning marilyn, and heroin means nothing,
Cause I need ammos for my submarine, for shoot pirates of Caribbean.
And those little kids couldn’t sleep well, cause Im just ghost,
And scared them from cost to cost. And Im close to get them realize what them phost to know.
And now I must to quit it, even if this the last time Im love to spit it,
And sorry for those bitches whose im hated…nah fuck…I can’t admit it.
I fucking must to stop, its good stop to top, and make million songs more or just not.
But thanks for listened my crap, but don’t get sad just listen my next tracks…


…and back to `89 when im born in, stretch my mom’s whole for what he going to do for me.
My head couldn’t get off because it’s full of those dirty ideas for get money,
And that’s funny cause I could change my dick to carrots if they could pay me,
But fuck parrots whose scream im crazy cause I didn’t care them.
I flash them off from toilet; like I did for those films of police dog Roy and you know it.
And u couldn’t avoid it, cause disturb my plans get explode me.
And im exploding like volcano and spit hot lava on you.
And mom I fuck made song for you, cause u said I write wrong.
I turn my cheap ass mic on and read it. And even if u padding me stop Im not,
cause I want to piss you off, like u did for me. Did for teen?
Fuck you want to brake every dream what would imagine,
cause im not fucking Mozart mom, Im way off from classic,
and u fuck gave me role model, just suck dick and show your big parts like camel.
And u gave me note how act, I just crap on it, made song of it cause I don’t give a shit.
Cauze im not ordinary kid like u wanted me to be,
Im not fag boy mom, I never start cheerleading.
And my leadership lead me to use cash and not choose your MasterCard,
cause u haven’t even credits for it, and that lend cant never lasted on.
you never pay back, but fuck mom, keep dream to be man and send messages to gay chat,
so I can aim black, and use clothes of K.K.K and trying to hide my whiteness,
but when sun rise they see my brightness and I decide to be white artist.
……………only one right artist………….
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Old 08-01-05, 07:22 AM   #2
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Old 08-02-05, 03:44 AM   #3
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uppin...............feed will be rtf..............
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Old 08-07-05, 09:08 AM   #4
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uppin this last time...............................
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Old 08-07-05, 09:13 AM   #5
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umm wasnt really feelin this ....but your structure was off which made it tuff to gasp a flowl....up on multis....up on vocab...and your lines is too stretched out...fix that up for a better flow....no hate just stating my opinion 5/10 man keep elevatin...rtf
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