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07-20-05, 08:53 PM | #1 | ||
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Confessions (My Life)
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Confessions Well I was brought up never to steal, never to Lie Persuadin to consider, life pulls fates lever to Cry When I was a kid, I looked up to my dad Always But when I turned a teen, I caught his dealin Days My uncle built a bunk bed, so my dreams sunk Dead But knowin him, confusion made him a drunk Head I caught him countin, later night I opened it to See.. So I opened it, I was astonished, wantin to Plea I seen it was more then 50 pounds, I lost my Mind Unable to rewind time, visualizin such ones eye Find So I took a few grams, hid it all in a lays chip Bag The next day, after school I sold it with a quick Pay Right on 4/20, impossible my dad didn’t Notice Only 1 person owin me, I felt without a hint Hopeless 3 days after that day, I smoked for my first Time 1 year passin me by, it felt much like a cursed Chime Soon I started to see such arguments, it forced Pain My mother and father, fightin for divorced Shame So they got divorced, now it’s a dispute for the Kids I wanted to live with dad, but moms sayin it’s a Fib So I leave, rollin up my sleeves knownin I wont Hold My decision is correct, my mission so I don’t Fold Stuck in reality, askin Christ when do I win Mentality I live the passion to suffer, feelin the sin Mortality But never immortality, considerin I cant run Away My dad tellin me, education is the key for fun Today Takin all I can as advantage, never to abuse Sabotage Feelin hopeless, takin all factors to refuse Camouflage Askin a life question, never to suggest such a Quest I sever a wish, askin for help with my family Request To believe my message, to understand I ask Truth My confession of being involved, believin as a Youth I cant stop the fights, to much arguing with my Mom Self destruction, an eruption, explodin its own Bomb My own selfish thought, arguin creatin my own Steam But brothers get annoying, now when I’m known Mean Understandin I messed up, I begin to lose Control Knowin my dad aint got the money to choose Parole Confuses me, mesmerized and so frozen I’m Petrified But I feel stuck in a illusion, feelin more self Glorified Without one excuse, I ponder why was my dad Fired Then why was he hired?, beginnin to feel a tad Tired I take time to idealize, would I gain if I’d Realize.. Fortune and fame, when marijuana makes me feel Lies Now that my uncle smoked it with me, I want to Quit Even when it makes me relaxed, my vision goes Split I asked my uncle to tell my dad, so they shared 2 Drinks In the middle of the night, my uncle dared to Think So he told my dad, I smoked a few joints with Him My dad stuck, mad yet happy, he understood Within At home the next day, complex yet his checks Say.. We on welfare, why he poor, so I stay back and Pray I might not live in the projects, I scramble for Subjects But haters gotta say shit, so I look for proper Objects Now that my dads knows, its awkward how I cant Stop Him sayin, fuck the hip hop, yet god wont grant Top As I say peace to all who misjudged me, I find Frustration Always behind temptation, I aint afraid to mind Salvation The aggression of my wish, the fetus to feel and Receive To always feel relieve, in belief so I begin to Achieve
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07-20-05, 08:57 PM | #2 | ||
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07-25-05, 04:27 AM | #5 | ||
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LMAO^ kids just a brainless fuck who cant be be bothered reading talent. maybe we should post some 50 cent lyrics,then hell read more. this is dope bro. alot of emotion used...alot of solid concepts. I acctually never relised how much you have elevated. you going topical like crazy bro. My uncle built a bunk bed, so my dreams sunk Dead really like this bro. you got mice mutlis in this,solid flow. I enjoyed this bro.You should'a waited till next month and i woudl of voted it open mic of the month. Ysd@ |
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07-23-05, 09:20 PM | #6 | ||
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good for you.
uppin
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07-24-05, 02:40 PM | #7 | ||
Witness, 4 God, 4-Ever
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liked this, was really feelin it, although it was long, it was good and you stayed on topic, flow was good, vocab and multies i saw were also good, keep it up man
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i come from a time when you earned respect, for your rhyme and the way you made words connect, not the money that you made or the girls you sexed, a concept you obviously haven't heard of yet Mars Ill
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07-24-05, 05:38 PM | #8 | ||
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IP:
thanks a lot
uppin
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07-24-05, 05:45 PM | #9 | |
Succès Facile!
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IP:
Damn...Nice story,you came with ah movie,Nice drop....
I like tha part when you where talkin bout stealin your uncles weed an sellin that shit at school....pretty vivid...It had ta be real 4 you ta come so graphic with tha story. *As I say peace to all who misjudged me, I find Frustration Always behind temptation, I aint afraid to mind Salvation The aggression of my wish, the fetus to feel and Receive To always feel relieve, in belief so I begin to Achieve * ^^Thats dope..Raw lines..Imma qoute that in my sig...Inspiring,Mos Def!^^ 10/10..cuz it was so graphic an tha story evolved nice....Wanna see more of shit like this! |
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07-25-05, 02:53 AM | #10 | ||
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thanks a lot, i really apreciate you really feelin my piece thats a first time someones ever rated me 10/10
thanks a lot uppin for more
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08-09-05, 04:11 AM | #11 | ||
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IP:
thanks a lot,
uppin for more feed.
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08-09-05, 02:14 PM | #12 | ||
Banned: Cheating
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IP:
This was dope man sick imagery, good concept felt the emotion.........kept me reading not really boring like chalk said....i felt ur vocab and multis were tight.....kept on track wit tha story 10/10 fa sho man no doubt....RTF on my sig links......1
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