Battle Rules:

6 - 10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-04-05 at 06:11 AM

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Kamze has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-04-05 06:05 AM.

Kid Chaos has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-04-05 06:08 AM.

This 'Kid' can't hadle me, i'm like a 'element' from the 'periodic table',
And he's feeling my 'force' and 'heat', like he was labelled as 'flamable',
He only 'signed up today', thinkin he could beat me and get his status to 'rookie',
But he couldn't 'estimate' or 'predic' me, like i was a 'fortune cookie',
I 'juggle' personals and punches, like i was a 'clown' in the 'circus',
But i dropped on the 'flow(floor)', and threw them at him on purpose,
This 'kid' can't handle the 'Chaos', that i'm causin in all my lines,
Why talk about him being 'wack', just take a look at his 'rhymes',
Your rhymes could be classified as 'killer', cuz people die of 'boardum',
And, you like a cd, cuz you're 'bootable' from the forum.

1st line-elements in the periodic table are harmful
2nd line-and he feels my heat, cuz he's like flamable
3rd line-he signed up today
4th line-you don't know what you'll get in fortune cookies
5th line-clowns juggle balls=i juggle pernals and punches
6th line-but i dropped in the flow and threw em at him
7th line-his name kid and chaos
9th line-his rhymes could be killer, cuz he kills the people by boarin em
10th line-cuz you boot a cd to make it run=he can get booted from the forum for bein wack.

multiple punches launched play stops leave this bitch slain//
horrible gut shots my aims locked time to comense fire on this wanna be game//

im rippin this pest with shots puttin holes in his chest//
puttin this fake to rest his death is a sin ive confessed//

see im over your head once my rhymes are read//
rappin wont get your children fed so little bitch go to bed//

in this battle your the forest and i think im the flames coward//
ill start a forest fire while yo lame ass gets devoured//

to the end my skillz blossom into crys of war//
youve lost three battles so ill "even" your score//

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Child Of Chaos

C'mon we need votes now, to settle this battle. C'mon peeps' i'll return the favour.

Yo, is anyone gonna vote, c'mon get the votes in to decide this battle. I'll return the favour.

Voted For: Kamze

You won by far, punches was better structure was better......kid chaos ur lines were basic tuff to win battles like that......so v/kamze

C'mon anyone else gonna vote, we need to settle tha winner of the battle. Iy you vote, i'll vote on your battles, so c'mon.

Voted For: Kamze

Kid Chaos

multiple punches launched play stops leave this bitch slain//
horrible gut shots my aims locked time to comense fire on this wanna be game//
2. Concept had potential. Not a punch.
im rippin this pest with shots puttin holes in his chest//
puttin this fake to rest his death is a sin ive confessed//
0. Just a wack statement.
see im over your head once my rhymes are read//
rappin wont get your children fed so little bitch go to bed//
0. Didn't have a concept or a punch.
in this battle your the forest and i think im the flames coward//
ill start a forest fire while yo lame ass gets devoured//
2. Concept had potential. No punch.
to the end my skillz blossom into crys of war//
youve lost three battles so ill "even" your score//
4. First decent shit you've had.

Overall - 8

Kamze

This 'Kid' can't hadle me, i'm like a 'element' from the 'periodic table',
And he's feeling my 'force' and 'heat', like he was labelled as 'flamable',
1. Periodic Table and Flammable don't rhyme. Concept had potential. You worded it bad though.
He only 'signed up today', thinkin he could beat me and get his status to 'rookie',
But he couldn't 'estimate' or 'predic' me, like i was a 'fortune cookie',
0. Just a wack statment. Concept is played.
I 'juggle' personals and punches, like i was a 'clown' in the 'circus',
But i dropped on the 'flow(floor)', and threw them at him on purpose,
1. Flow doesn't sound like floor.. at all. This is a statement. Could have had potential.
This 'kid' can't handle the 'Chaos', that i'm causin in all my lines,
Why talk about him being 'wack', just take a look at his 'rhymes',
2. Concept had potential. Wasn't worded into a punch.
Your rhymes could be classified as 'killer', cuz people die of 'boardum',
And, you like a cd, cuz you're 'bootable' from the forum.
6. This was pretty cool.

Overall - 12

Vote - Kamze

thanks for the votes, we uppin for more votes. C'mon i'll RTF!!!!!!!!!

Voted For: Kamze

hmmm.....i know you can do better than this but man you took this shud i explain it?its quite obvious

better punches at least you made attempts at personals good set ups id say but you should try and make your punches hitharder good concepts which could have been developed more to make the punches connect well

kid chaos

good multis ya punches didnt seem to hit but w/e ya need to develop ya ideas more an make em into punches anyway keep up

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OYD MAFIA

Voted For: Kamze

lets brake it down............

Kamze
This 'Kid' can't hadle me, i'm like a 'element' from the 'periodic table',
And he's feeling my 'force' and 'heat', like he was labelled as 'flamable',
He only 'signed up today', thinkin he could beat me and get his status to 'rookie',
But he couldn't 'estimate' or 'predic' me, like i was a 'fortune cookie',
I 'juggle' personals and punches, like i was a 'clown' in the 'circus',
But i dropped on the 'flow(floor)', and threw them at him on purpose,
This 'kid' can't handle the 'Chaos', that i'm causin in all my lines,
Why talk about him being 'wack', just take a look at his 'rhymes',
Your rhymes could be classified as 'killer', cuz people die of 'boardum',
And, you like a cd, cuz you're 'bootable' from the forum.

nice drop....some played concepts but alot personal and new shit....flow was ok...could be better.......
structure was pretty gd.....and puches hit hard......
nice drop...

K-Chaos

multiple punches launched play stops leave this bitch slain//
horrible gut shots my aims locked time to comense fire on this wanna be game//
^^nah second line played...
im rippin this pest with shots puttin holes in his chest//
puttin this fake to rest his death is a sin ive confessed//
^^not hard pucnch..self clorifian.....but nice flow.
see im over your head once my rhymes are read//
rappin wont get your children fed so little bitch go to bed//
^^^read and bed didnt rhyme....and not hard punch
in this battle your the forest and i think im the flames coward//
ill start a forest fire while yo lame ass gets devoured//
^^this as ur best punch..could be still worded better
to the end my skillz blossom into crys of war//
youve lost three battles so ill "even" your score//
^^^his 2-3...u even his score..so u lose...shit not punch

this was pretty easy......Kamze cames lot harder...kid got gd flow but not hard punches......

Vote:Kamze

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