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08-15-05, 07:56 PM
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Rv 2005
IP: 8A05 210E
http://www.community.rapverse.com/s...ad.php?t=204485
http://www.community.rapverse.com/s...ad.php?t=204419 ....Recap of my years of being on here ...Realize A Mastamind At Work [COLOR=SkyBlue]The beginning of a new year, sippin a few beers, talkin on AIM Talkin bout lames, me & my Trigga Crew clownin dudes, talkin our names We'd just left a site, the shit was tight, then it turned to garbage Thought bout makin our own place, but didnt have the tools to start it But S.P said wait, i kno of a place, Rapverse, no one knows us there I said Rapverse? That shits sounds gay, but either way, i dont care I peeped the site, thoughts like dukes is lame, what i make my username? Then hit me random, the best tandem, told S.P so he'd choose the same First was hated on, nothin new, we knew dukes would be talking Shit was a tease, had more tricks up my sleeve, then McCully Culkin We started a crew, first it was just us two, but then it slowly grew Considered seasoned rookies, but had no pussies like a lonely dude Finally respected, the shit was hectic, but then finally I felt this place Thoughts entered, I brought my Fleet to the Center like the Celtics place Climbin that ladder, all I heard was chatter, more fear than hate The more dukes called me out, the more I put more ears to fate But after many battles, the semi cattle, seemed to only bore me Cuz my machete went thru more heads, then Jason Voochies I needed to wreck a new set so I stepped to the open mic world Read sum spits, but only 1 out of 5 was scary like the Spice Girls So I decided to polish my game, step up and demolish sum lames Jumped on a diss, and gave R.A.W. more fits, then Osama n Hussein I was havin som fun, rappin bout guns, fags started talking sour Sluts, I cant help it I touch the 9 daily, like the hand of an hour Fuck all u cowards, how im gon rap about palm trees and villas Where I live at, theres only slums, bums, calm peeps and killas And if u wanna hold some scrilla, pick up some rocks or a 9 to 5 U wont inherit shit, maybe a gambling debt for the rest of ur life All creative drops off the top, i aint even pedal, I rode on pegs And I got more feed and praise, then chickens layin golden eggs Now a days, I don’t write as much, Summers clouding my pencil Inactivity put the Entourage, 6 Feet Under like an HBO schedule For 8 months, put fake cunts to shame, and still whores is rattled I reflect hate, I got the game in check mate, like .Merkage. before a battle…
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08-16-05, 09:05 AM
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Odi et Amo
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Nice little piece here...
Good concept, you just basically tell the story of the times you been on Rapverse and actually I enjoyed reading it. Your vocab was on point, flow was good, maybe off here and there but overall it was pretty solid. What I liked most about this was how you had some nice wordplay, nice comparisons and such. It made the piece interesting to read in fact. Keep it up!
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