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Old 08-13-05, 08:01 AM   #1
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MERKAGE *exsculsive*

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KON simply deliver merkage, like a spiked wreckin ball demolish-in-homes...
shells let losse and seperate the meat from ya fuckin cartlidge-and-bones...
my cartdridge-is-honed, red dot hittin ya sweaty fore-head let off more-lead...
even smart-chicks-is-boned then seconds later your whore-dead...
venom infested-flows, nigga's done threw many 'punches' i digested-blows...
On my block arrested-mo', Kon up on the corner dont test im wreckless-so...
imma Finish this murder rap-shit, If you rap bout pistols be down to clap-bitch...
Fuck wit me get smack-quick, doc be sowen you up like jeans lap-stitch...
cats now really is whack-holmes, spread the news-dudes...
Kon get angry i attack-domes, let off wit the duece-duece...
I'm applyin but 3 percent, of the skill jus my nut-sack-bears...
my style not for-rent, come back when ya nuts-got-hairs...
Cats be minor-league, dont need to spit the power-i-posess...
ya spine'll-bleed, Fuck wit me, they put flowers-on'ya-chest..
Representative of the Move-ment, Kon and R.A.W runnin-shit...
Tecks-attentative they ooze-clips, keep at least a gun-in-hip...
Rap is fun i clap a gun ya black ass run you whack and dumb....
slap ya son trap ya hun tap her bum smack her fat back and cum... *HA*
I’m Kon the King of my hood and da local Hip-Hop...
When I grab a mic spit dat merkage nigga’s lip-drop..
My own dad, told me I was a bastard so why-bother...
Fuck that bronx rican spicca, cuz I call rap my-father...
Bullets ’penetrate’ and leave ya infected for days...
My guns infected so many nigga’z I call it AIDS...
I swing with no words and be leavin you tooth-less...
This is a fuckin freestyle so imagine my booth-spits...
I spit that heat man and what I speak is scary-words...
CUZ WHEN I ‘shoot’ its like I was fuckin Larry-Bird... MOTHER FUCKER... EZ!!!
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Old 08-15-05, 09:24 AM   #2
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upp'in this shit....
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Old 08-15-05, 09:36 AM   #3
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Old 08-15-05, 09:11 PM   #4
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is that Kon as in Kon...troverzey?

Anyway, This shit was pretty cool. It didn't really have any topic or anything, but thats alright.

Some of the multis seemed a bit forced. Some were genuinely forced, but others I think they may just seem forced to other people because of your accent(if you are kon).. like the first line doesnt rhyme perfectly with the second, but if you say it in the right way it does.... and dont use dashes.

The quality of the lines was on and off and some wordplay was a bit simple... But I think it was more on than off.

other than that it was good... good flow.. good vocab and shit.. Just watch those forced multis

If you are kontro, good shit working with a new style... if not.. still good shit.

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Old 08-16-05, 09:00 AM   #5
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thanks for ya feed back fam...

and to u'r question no not kon-traversy...
its KON as-in kon aka criminal aka Intensify effect
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Old 08-17-05, 12:36 PM   #6
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