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Old 08-17-05, 03:25 AM   #1
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My Porn Trough

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It aint hard to tell this ballistic mist’s my spit
I wanna kick it with a kickin bitch the most legitimate
So here’s the plan………..
Pleasure is pain baby can we re-arrange the game and maybe
You’ll accept this gift my token of hope
Hoping in no other word’s that have never been wrote
She quiver’s a bit, bites her teeth on her lower lip it’s sweet, mystique bliss
The scent of her hair hit’s me trying hard not to stare but damn the twist in her lil hips
No mistress bitch but try tell me girl you don’t love this dick
It’s j-drastic, with more sadistic raw stats
Morbid called me for the onslaught attack on you wack rappers
My back pack’s fatter it’s just doper then opium’s only habit
Like being savage or bunny rabbit’s, javelins and maverick’s
I saw heaven….
I was hangin downside up from a tree plucking at my mandolin
There was no reverend just God and me with bomb beverage
O Lordy Lord it’s settled my morning dawn is calling more
For word’s in store and brought, porn’s and sort’s picked off the board
Drop kicked off the porch
I sought and found this life was worth the fighting for
Bright my scorching thoughts like light fury, rap’s galore
Close your eyes and open your mind like a blind jury
I Don’t speak loosely down for throwing brick’s at kid’s who persist to abuse it
And understand unity…. my message in music.
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Spit it from the heart, spit a thousand darts, split ya head apart…
Emcees depart, like rubin carter my hurricane left u scarred…
Like a spiked bat grammatical bar, like a wonderland drug…
Tumble - ing like a flagon of rum and 2 blunts, like the funk baby…

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Old 08-17-05, 03:44 AM   #2
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tights look top seeing this recorded no doubt nice lyrics aint seen u in a minute good to have u abck
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Old 08-17-05, 06:08 AM   #3
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cheer's for the feed....uppin my ish.
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Spit it from the heart, spit a thousand darts, split ya head apart…
Emcees depart, like rubin carter my hurricane left u scarred…
Like a spiked bat grammatical bar, like a wonderland drug…
Tumble - ing like a flagon of rum and 2 blunts, like the funk baby…
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Old 08-17-05, 06:45 AM   #4
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Spit it from the heart, spit a thousand darts, split ya head apart…
Emcees depart, like rubin carter my hurricane left u scarred…
Like a spiked bat grammatical bar, like a wonderland drug…
Tumble - ing like a flagon of rum and 2 blunts, like the funk baby…
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Old 08-17-05, 10:18 PM   #5
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Good shit.

I'm likin your new stuff.. I can see a unique style starting to form in your verses. Flow was pretty cool.. wasnt run of the mill, so it made things more interesting. I liked how it didnt really have much direction... Usually things need direction, but this kind of thing doesnt.

You know what you're doing I dont really need to give you advice on anything..
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Old 08-19-05, 02:39 AM   #6
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nice....i dunno, is porn trough like some aussie slang or sump, cause i've heard it quite a bit now from australians, lmlo.....anyways, yeh.....liked this, flow was sweet, so was the not perfect, but effective style..unique, like OMB.....didn't need to be defined.......overall, i liked the piece, because it was simple, yet vivid and enjoyable,.........word, keep up.
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