http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=204446

sin who?? tryna fuck wit LL like you suttin special.. looks like i need to merk you again bitch

little bitch actin tuff but ya wackness amuses me
and LL slaughterin this cat like animal cruelty
tryna diss my crew... that diss was awfull n shit
ya text is wack n it cudnt get worse till i heard ya audios kid*
ya cant spit lyrics bitch you not rippin it up
cos your like a gay post man.... your delivery sucks**
your a gangster?? na you just a wack nerd and gimick
and your rhymes are a joke... like the rapverse olympics
you a soft kid tryna be hard.. wat ya wantin to fight bro?
youd run and call the cops because you allready lost 5-0***
you change ya name but ima be real n get u facin the truth
cos wen i write my lyrics im known to leave pen n paper abused****
ill cave ya skull in n leave your brain splattered
your just wacker gayer version of the madrapper
you a pussy man you aint wantin to test
cos you like bball players..... only tough on the net
this is cards.... cos wen i spit ya get dealt
only time you came out on top.. was wen ya dissin yaself*****
i rip kids wit sick writtens wen im droppin sick lyrics
just go and bite another concept and make a wack diss wit it******
you get signed?? lol no label would ever invest
sayin LL audio sucks...... you aint beat one of us yet*******
im better than you.. ya dont wanna fuck wit me kid
its that time of the month... cos i left this pussy bleedin

*kid sucks at audio BIG TIME

**same as above.. basically dudes delivery is ass

*** i KOd dude in audio

**** pen n paper = dudes old name

***** dropped a diss dissin himself

****** bit da sherades concept from papoose aswell as da hook structure and verse structure etc and same wit da game and 300 bars n runnin

******* said our audio is wack... but is still to beat any of us in audio.. infact is yet to win an audio battle

lmao. he got merked by a audio head in text, nice verse..

HAHAHHAHAHAHHA LL 4 Life Bitch u cant fuck wi us
Nice shit leady!!!!!
N we aint even heard Daubs diss yet or ECs lmao

n u know its true

OK...honest opinion here...

FLow was bad.Some lines coulda been shortened or longer for a better flow.I know OM's are not sopposed to be as hard as battke rap...but....A lot of the punches here were basic and played.Mailman/delivery...joke/RVO...played and basic.And at the end...you didn't need to explain your shit.All of ur lines were self explamatory with lack of complexity and pressense of links.The bright side to ur Om was the personals.The one about dissing himself and losing to u were ur best lines.
But overall...don't get full of yourself yet...you could still use the work.

little bitch actin tuff but ya wackness amuses me
and LL slaughterin this cat like animal cruelty
^^basic and flowed bad....2/10
tryna diss my crew... that diss was awfull n shit
ya text is wack n it cudnt get worse till i heard ya audios kid*
^^this was good....6/10
ya cant spit lyrics bitch you not rippin it up
cos your like a gay post man.... your delivery sucks**
^^Played as fuck....4/10
your a gangster?? na you just a wack nerd and gimick
and your rhymes are a joke... like the rapverse olympics
^^This line sucked..RVO ain't that bad..3/10
you a soft kid tryna be hard.. wat ya wantin to fight bro?
youd run and call the cops because you allready lost 5-0***
^^GOOD.....8/10
you change ya name but ima be real n get u facin the truth
cos wen i write my lyrics im known to leave pen n paper abused****
^^basic and we all know his onld name...no explainin needed..4/10
ill cave ya skull in n leave your brain splattered
your just wacker gayer version of the madrapper
^^meh...OK...4/10
you a pussy man you aint wantin to test
cos you like bball players..... only tough on the net
^^............5/10
this is cards.... cos wen i spit ya get dealt
only time you came out on top.. was wen ya dissin yaself*****
^^Your best line..........8.5/10
i rip kids wit sick writtens wen im droppin sick lyrics
just go and bite another concept and make a wack diss wit it******
^^1st line flowed good...but the 2nd line was shit...3/10
you get signed?? lol no label would ever invest
sayin LL audio sucks...... you aint beat one of us yet*******
^^you said enough on his audio already....move ahead...4/10
im better than you.. ya dont wanna fuck wit me kid
its that time of the month... cos i left this pussy bleedin
^^PLayed....2/10

Keep in mind I rated these higher due to this being an OM and not a battle diss...none of these lines would be fit for a battle...

OVERALL-4.5/10....Needs work

Only an honest opinon by me here...don't get mad cause I ain't a dickrider like the others here

lol @ you actin like i do text everyday i only dropped text cos kid doesnt deserve an audio.... i stopped text well over 2 years ago and was one of da best mheads on RM and RC but if u read dudes diss... ud see dis is more dan enuff to merk da dude... and RVO is wack as fuck.... i vgot dicked out my battle wit half lines votes against me.. tell me mhow da fuck any1 would allow (MD wins cos i fealt mhis verse more) as a vote??? and u say its not gay???? pffftttt..... rev needs replacin

well how'm I sopposed to know that you don't normally do text.And even if you don't...I ain't gonna take that shit into consideration.So if you drop trash now...and you say..."I stopped text"..I'm sopposed to give you a pass?No..it doesn't work like that.And I be on RM too.Not on RC.And I did see Sin'sere's diss.The disses were weak...but his originality in his concept and shit made up for it.Which is why I thought his was good.And the RVO's gay in ur opinon...*shrugs*..w/e.Still doesn't make a good diss.

And like I said before..I was just givin an honest opinion....be grateful I left a lot of feedback for you..

its been stated and its known im audio.. al i done since i arrived is drop audio.. if my audio 2-0 and my text is 0-0 and u aint seen any text drops from me.. wats it tellin you???? exactly.... and da RVO is a joke... crew votes allowed?? un-explained votes allowed??? come on now dude mite aswell say (everybody feel free to cheat) and after readin your verse against ridicule i noticed you use da stretched structure and like usin forced wordplay... sorry i aint into dat lame stuff i only write wat i can spit in audio... anyways enuff.. uppin for people dat like to write natural verses insteada forced ones

LOL......the one against Ridicule was fooling around......i'll tell you my lines weren't strechted....n damn dawg...I didn't want beef...but you had to bring it in....LOL...expect an Om diss from me...

lol ur lines are stretched... none of em would fit to a beat.. and u want to talk bout flow??? do u write to a beat?? i doubt it... i wasnt tryna bring beef but if u take stuff i mentioned dat seriously.. ur obviously abit of a cry baby woopty doo im scared... sum little textcees bout to diss me LOOOOOOOL i cnt wait.. cos fact is... despite if ur better in text or not.. id still merk u badly in audio

well....I ain't up for audio yet...I will move to audio with time...but not now.I hear ya gotta d/l a lotta shit and stuff.I ain't up for it yet.
And no...I haven't written to beat as I have never done audio yet.

And LOL.....I'll forget about that diss now...

aight good diss man for bein audio but jus to let u kno my diss was not that hard im gon wait for the last 100 so beware bitches is TC mothafucka yall LL = Down the Drain.....bitches.....

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LOL wanna battle me again?? in audio for a name change.. looser rocks da name da winner says for 3 months.. if da looser makes a new account and doesnt remain active on da account wit da name da winner decided on... your ip is banned... you down?? or you vgonna prove exactly y your my bitch

how bout u battle me in text then......cuz like i said i barely do audio i dont have the time and equipment like u do....do stfu.....

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