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08-18-05, 04:14 PM
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Corrupted relevance..
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This is actually a keystyle poem...but everything ties in with eachother, once you figure out whats being said...
Load it, pull it back..release, and repeat till I suc-seed.. plantin seeds of doubt in the minds of the naive.. but the naive is so many, so as a nation, we're doubtful.. i contemplate on racial relations and spit out a mouthful.. cause my thoughts rush while guns bust...and nuns lust for christ.. but i'm white....so I can't possibly understand a man who's demands.. fan out to the klan...damn that lamb of God, who's sham of a church.. built on a rock and roll, the vatican city condemns music of such lustful.. soul, and shit I don't know how to think this, but I sure can word this.. microsoft makes millions of billions, and theres billions of people.. if you mixed them all, they could eat off of millions, and yet.. millions of us complain because our 50 dollar steak is too rare.. which by the way, it's rare for any person in a third world country.. to see a third of 50 dollars...and No i havn't rhymed all the fuckin time.. because these thoughts can't settle for the best rhyming word.. it'd be asburd to settle for less than what I was thinking and feeling.. I think I'm gonna keep going and going, energizer bunny because.. we keep making good, and let it go bad.. who the fuck buys milk and puts it in the oven.. and I'm lovin the fact that any minority can say "it's cause i'm black".. right? wrong...it's because your using your heritage that you should cherish it.. to your advantage, and that can't be right, because God has no race.. and yet he divided us, and continues to brag indirectly about himself.. heres the mathematics, God is greater than white, black, yellow and brown.. so that means we should be equal too, but we keep putting eachother down.. I put you down, that means white is greater than black, you put me down.. that means black is greater than white, bit it ain't right, it ain't right.. equality is a facade, i'm stuck in this desert of hatred, picturing a mirage.. but it's so far, that not even exhaustion can play tricks.. I'm proud to be american? a nation of racism, and my ancesotors layed the bricks.. xbox's and playstations, I'd pay masons to build a brick road to the illuminati.. so I could tell a hottie her composition and body doesn't matter.. because according to the book of jesus..we're all gonna die, and thats .. why we become christian, because george w. bush goes to church.. and I'd keep talkin, but face it people, my thoughts hurt..
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08-18-05, 04:17 PM
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IP: EA53 D1FB
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Seek & Destroy We have fun in my basement Time is not long, and indecision is hells cemment. So the well is rented, untill heaven is relevant. Untill then, to be eloquent, sex cells, so le'ts cellibate. "watch what you watchin...fox keeps feedin' us toxin's..stop sleepin' start thinkin outside of the box and unplug from the matrix doctrine....but watch what you say cause big brother is watchin" - nas - sly fox The I.H.C.J.S.F.M.T.R.H.P.M.M.W.T.S.M.S.I.T.F.F.W.A.S. O Crew
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08-18-05, 04:20 PM
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pain is weakness leaving the body
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IP: F38C 26F8
was feelin this a lot. never seen anyone write a poem like that. as far as flow and lyricism i can't really help u cuz there's nothin i saw that needs corrected. just a good poem.
9/10
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