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Old 08-19-05, 04:37 AM   #1
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I Personally Close This Becuase It Was Wack and My Quality Was Trash

Look Out For Some REAL Left Coast Productions Heat Real Soon




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Old 08-19-05, 09:28 AM   #2
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this was good. yeah your quality bought it down, but i like some of your lyrics and the way you presented them was real original. keep at it.
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Old 08-19-05, 01:17 PM   #3
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Yea I Appreciate That Fam


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Old 08-19-05, 04:08 PM   #4
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alright first thing..u talk too much in the intro..naw im playin..but your quality definitely needs some work..your flow was a little choppy..were u watchin tv while doing this cause i thought i could hear a tv..you definitly sound like a west coast artist..ur whole style is definitely west coast..your lyrics were alright..maybe if you upped the quality you would definitely be better.
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Old 08-19-05, 04:46 PM   #5
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This Right Here Is Meh, Recite Your Shit A Little More Before You Record, So It Smooths Out Your Flow, Its Like You Got It Down, But At Certain Lines, U Didn't Correct How It Was Wrote, So Your Flow Falls Off, Then Back On, The Beats Aight, Work On What You Saying, But Ya Lyrics Aren't Trash, Just Not That Pifft .. But You'll Get There, Keep Doin Ya Thing, And Quality Means Nothing Keep At It ...
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Old 08-19-05, 05:19 PM   #6
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Yo Thanx Man, Dats Fa Sho

Im Really Just Tryin To Focus On My Lyricism
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Old 08-19-05, 06:19 PM   #7
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yea...quality is trash...needs to be elevated in order for people to even want to listen to u...this hurts my ears


and the constant drone of the beat sounds like shit


hw da fuck do u record?


ur flow sounds decent


nothing special

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