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Old 08-15-05, 03:44 PM   #1
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"Your Last Night" Devin ft Tony Green

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Green=Tony Green

[Talking:Tony Green]
Yeah alot of niggaz run they mouth about me and were I'm from but until you've seen niggaz get jumped for they new kicks 10 niggaz sittin on a porch waiting for a nigga to look at them funny then holla at me cause I'm from the hood....


[Verse1evin]
can you get through poverty while puttin the killin, stealin-away
When you can make a dollar out of 15 cents with out comitin-crimes
Is it predicting-lies, or lieing, lookin in the devils sinnin-eyes
for girls is it winnin-guys, or guys winnin them over
or when you can alwas be drunk while stayin sober
what about the goverment givin-some-power-to-the-gays
well my real life is what im livin-every-hour-of-the-days


[Verse1:Tony Green]
I'm the interlectual type so my mind stay wiery.
Theories in my head on how to make these hoes feel me.
Can;t respect a lier cause a lier can't be trusted.
Commit a crime with him next day I'm getting busted.
I done been crushed with...gun shots and knife wounds.
Done had nights when my head spinning like a typhoon.
Morning night or noon gotta deal with these fools.
Abid by all the rules life changin real soon.


[Hook:Tony Green & Devin]repeat2x
I got a nine on my waist and a blount in my mouth.
Anyhting lookin fierce shit I'm airing it out.

And everynight I pray erase my sins from the past.
Cause you never know when a night might be your very last.


[Verse2:Tony Green & Devin]
I cant help it when my mind ghostwrites-for-my-hands
and i love all the e-mails and post-writes-from-my-fans

Back by popular demand, p-poppin on handstands.
In the hood you get crushed like coke or beer cans.

thats real life when people from all over give-you-love
Now i got fans from across the world my fam's buildin-up

And I gotta stay up... represent for the block.
A nigga done got rocked, couldn't kill me with one shot

i do what a dealer-doese, give you a lil-then-charge
Gettin money like bank cards, roll with me play your part.
for these lines that i stop the cuss in i still-been-hard
Can't repsect you snitch niggaz you pussy from the start.
forgive me for this sin-god, im goin through a real-life
if i was real-tight you would think i'd get a deal-right

I hustle every night to keep food on my table.
Cain in my hand gettin money is always able.

problem is im still-white, labels only care bout-ya-look
Try to play you by the book, think guards will leave you shook.
they dont care about your lyrics only if you shout-ya-hook
Aint gone let me work for money then yours gettin took.

[Hook:Tony Green & Devin]repeat2x
I got a nine on my waist and a blount in my mouth.
Anyhting lookin fierce shit I'm airing it out.

And everynight I pray erase my sins from the past.
Cause you never know when a night might be your very last.


[Endingevin]
i wonder why the heck do you even bother readin this
about my life when you dont know what your real life is


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Old 08-15-05, 04:00 PM   #2
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iight uppin fo feed hot drop here!
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Old 08-15-05, 07:19 PM   #3
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i like diz piece u 2 collab well 2getha i could feel ya emotion thru-out & tha creativity, concept, structure & vocab was up 2 par keep writing dat real shit fa sho 9.5/10
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Old 08-16-05, 07:01 PM   #4
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Thanks Mayn Uppin For Some More Feed
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Old 08-17-05, 10:47 AM   #5
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uppin to the top some real shit!
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Old 08-17-05, 12:47 PM   #6
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Old 08-17-05, 01:25 PM   #7
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A niceeee drop.....concept was good.......vocab was aight also was the structure!!!!
Just try to make ya vocab more complex!!!!
7.5/10

Plz could you rtf on the OM at the bootom of my sig!!!!
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Old 08-17-05, 02:10 PM   #8
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dope shit fam...keep it up...was feeling the flow and vocab...nice imagery...keep it up niggas.......8/10.....RTF...link in mah sig.......
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Old 08-17-05, 04:32 PM   #9
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Thanxx favors will be returned uppin!
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Old 08-17-05, 09:29 PM   #10
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Old 08-17-05, 11:54 PM   #11
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this joint was pretty tight, i was feelin both of yall flows. i like how you did the lil switch off thing. went kiss and styles wit it. only thing i would say is maybe put some mutlies in the verse to switch it up a lil more. but overall i give it an 8/10.
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Old 08-18-05, 12:08 AM   #12
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Favor returned still uppin!
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Old 08-18-05, 01:16 PM   #13
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real nice flows went well together good concept work on developing it more tho fam....good emotion use more vocab tho ....0_o anyweays overall:v.nice erm 8/10
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Old 08-18-05, 01:31 PM   #14
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Thanxx foe good lookin!
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Old 08-18-05, 04:30 PM   #15
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