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Old 08-12-05, 11:50 AM   #1
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Revenge- Enygma and SevenThird

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I left feed on tito and q beat that, and q gangsta dillema

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titled: revenge
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Old 08-12-05, 12:16 PM   #2
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Listening......

the intro is cool......i dunno if i like the beat too much....

1st dude.....delivery was good...quality is ok...your flow seemed like your words were running together on a few parts...thats the only complaint......lyrically its was great.....just try to pronouce the words out clearer....

2nd dude...delivery is great....flow is on point good.....quality is good...lyrically it was good.....no complaints here...i think you shined on this track although both did well....

only thing i didnt like about this track was the hook....i just wasnt feelin it i dunno...the beat was ok...nothin special....

decent track overall....


PLEASE Return The Favor with feed on my new song "Jasons Lyric".....thanks
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Old 08-12-05, 01:36 PM   #3
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yo this beat is tight......

E's up first nice verse, flow is pretty solid, nice lyrics started speeding up at the end
Sev up next, lyrics are nice, flow is pretty solid, multis are nice......

pretty nice track and soundclick page
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Old 08-12-05, 02:06 PM   #4
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hmmmmmm, noticing the upgraded sc page, should be mineeeee!!!!!!!!!! muahahahaha lol jp jp, lets peep, ive heard dzk and k nice rap over this b4, so lets see if u can hang up to their version.... enygma soundin kinda different on this one, flow is better than usual i think, baseballbat/jason mask lines were cool, kick in tha door of municipal court hung tha jury n tha judge line was illl, heard cage say a line like that b4 tho... still a nyce concept, i think thats my fav enygma verse to date... seven comes in pretty nyce, flow is good, volume needs to be mastered a lil bit, soundin like u on sum dzk shyt once again, sumtimes it seems like u just tryin to make words rime instead of thinkin of better concepts, like po po roll up n u tryn get inside, i dunno ya multis are ill, thats what i feel about ur style, but i think that also takes away from what could be sum slightly better concepts, no doubt ya flow was ill on this tho, i think e's verse i was feelin a lil more on this one tho... yo rtf if u get a change pplz, i mean guys b sleepin on me nowadays.... lol good track yo
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Old 08-12-05, 04:17 PM   #5
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The beat is off the chain IMO...really good beat...really liked the intro too

Beat: 9/10
Intro: 10\10

Ok now off to the first guy's stuff, quality was ok, good stuff liked this

Quality: 8/10
Content: 8/10

The next guy was the best IMO ....good verse...great quality..and good deliverance

Quality: 10/10
Content: 9/10

RTF on my track...Forgive Me

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=204233

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Old 08-12-05, 04:22 PM   #6
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7/3...i don't remember ur voice soundin like this...lol...guess i haven't heard u in a long time

this is a solid track at best...nothing really made me go COT DAMN WOW

it was just good

simple n plain


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Old 08-12-05, 09:03 PM   #7
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........all i can say is refreshing to see yall two spitting again man breath of fresh air keep doin it!
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Old 08-13-05, 10:57 PM   #8
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stop sleepin on dis bitches
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Old 08-13-05, 11:01 PM   #9
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........all i can say is refreshing to see yall two spitting again man breath of fresh air keep doin it!



^^speakin of breath of fresh air...LOL

check out my new track called "breath of fresh air"

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Old 08-14-05, 12:37 AM   #10
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intro is fucking dope, lol i love it,
sounds like an old rock song, beat is fucking dope, first verse is dope, flow is dope,love the chorus, second verse is fucking dope, nice emotions and all and dope flow seriously
this song is: 9/10
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Old 08-14-05, 01:29 AM   #11
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yo this shit is hot....lyrics is real fam...and the delivery and flow is on point for real, stay dropping that heroin fam

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Old 08-14-05, 01:33 AM   #12
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thought the beat was ill.. sample was weird as fuck lmao.. but i liked the beat....


Enygma - I always liked you slut lol.. i thought your multis was tight.. yea your lines didi run together a lil bit.. once you get solve that.. you will be illy doo doo ..


Sevem - flow was good.. no messups ne where... lyrics were off the wall like you :P.... so that means they were good .. i wonder what it owuld be like if you used punchlines *ponders the dopeness it would bring* :O
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Old 08-17-05, 10:35 AM   #13
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Word.....first time I'm hearing this from beginning to end
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Old 08-17-05, 10:42 AM   #14
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Listenin...o_O...

beat is straight..like Clams said that sample is kinda ehh..

E..ya quality is ok..dubs is kinda wierd soundin..some of ya lines were to long..other then that ya flow was straight..OO OO! RUSHED!...i heard it..lyrics was straight tho..some regular E shit..

Seven..flow is good as usual..lyrics is pretty straight..delivery is good in the beginnin..then it seem like u calmed down =\..ya quality is pretty good tho..

overall the track is ok..dont think i left a half ass feed job..ckuz i didnt go to sleep..lol..

oo yea..go leave feed on m track
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Old 08-22-05, 06:36 PM   #15
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Uppin for more feedback
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