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Old 08-28-05, 04:14 AM   #1
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fags take a seat

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Im here to learn I know your fear will churn
up in your stomach fuck it i love it Im at the top like a summit

As i approach the window to see what the noise is
I relise lifes mixing my drinks and the main ingrediants poisens
and im not just sipping the juice im drinking litres a day
Drug rehabilitation wont work for those who think speed is the way
gripping each syllable to place it perfect without disruption
My rise wont proceed to fall like twin towers disruption
when i first sat down to right this i felt so rightous brain ignites fits
No limit like jermain I remain insain and contain controll
let me cut off the top a my head so my brain can flow
Im strange I know so outcast me let doubt blast me
into another land I will never have fear of another man
If he bleeds like I bleed then why should he act elete
fuck it...from here on in..fake fags take a seat


Im here to learn I know your fear will churn
up in your stomach fuck it i love it Im at the top like a summit
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Old 08-28-05, 04:15 AM   #2
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Old 08-28-05, 04:25 AM   #3
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It was a'ight...flow was off in places...some parts seemed a little simple to me, but whatever...I liked the direction...keep up...
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Old 08-28-05, 10:20 AM   #4
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yeah i thought it was a lil elementary drop up ur vocab 4 next time, structure was good, no meta's keep workin on dat aspect & writing also u can get betta fa sho ight
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