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Im here to learn I know your fear will churn up in your stomach fuck it i love it Im at the top like a summit As i approach the window to see what the noise is I relise lifes mixing my drinks and the main ingrediants poisens and im not just sipping the juice im drinking litres a day Drug rehabilitation wont work for those who think speed is the way gripping each syllable to place it perfect without disruption My rise wont proceed to fall like twin towers disruption when i first sat down to right this i felt so rightous brain ignites fits No limit like jermain I remain insain and contain controll let me cut off the top a my head so my brain can flow Im strange I know so outcast me let doubt blast me into another land I will never have fear of another man If he bleeds like I bleed then why should he act elete fuck it...from here on in..fake fags take a seat Im here to learn I know your fear will churn up in your stomach fuck it i love it Im at the top like a summit
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http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2399889
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2399890
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It was a'ight...flow was off in places...some parts seemed a little simple to me, but whatever...I liked the direction...keep up...
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IP:
yeah i thought it was a lil elementary drop up ur vocab 4 next time, structure was good, no meta's keep workin on dat aspect & writing also u can get betta fa sho ight
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