Battle Rules:

CREW BATTLE M.M.M. Vs. W.A.R.

TOPICAL BATTLE (Money is Power)

14 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 07-30-05 at 10:11 AM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.


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Black Queen has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-27-05 12:03 PM.

Os1ris has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-27-05 11:23 PM.

One whole unmarked US dollar, basically four small quarters
ten dimes, twenty nickles, hundred pennies, with no borders,
And its so deadly..,
Money makes the world go round, and as the amount mounds,
the value of it can go up, but evenually fall down,
Bring it back to its roots, where money is left in curls,
Cause way back then, a dollar could buy nearly the world
But shit changes kids, and eventually most things fall
Now the power of a dollar, gets you a twenty minute phone call
But since Bush is relected, it will never see the light of day,
Lots of dollars has its way for the power to persaue,
A dollar can save people, and can feed the homeless
Could also give them drug money, and make them hopeless
It's the good and the bad, however you choose to spend it
the postivies, negatives, and combinations are endless
But refer to 1 Timothy, "Money is the root of all evil,"
But hey.. we are human.. and live in a society with people
A small amount has enough power to change the world
One dollar can add to a death of an innocent little girl
Drugs happen, its a common thing to live with
But its sad to know, one dollar can support terrorists,
A dollar can stop the life of a few seeds to succeed,
Branches grab the cash, because money brings greed,
it can also be used for good, just think it through
it can be joked, what GOOD can one dollar really do?
But... what about the kids with no parents?
One dollar a month can also save kids in refugee tents
And, what about diseases that seems impossible to fade?
One dollar bring us closer to a hope of curing Cancer and aids
The power of a dollar can make us see what we have never saw
and it can also change our lives, and then make us fall
This is the power of a dollar, all the goods and the bads
Thats why I think wisely on all the dollars I ever had...

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"Money is Power, but Power is never letting money overshadow your past" - Kim Giegland
A successful career, respectful, accountin’ for clients…
And my lifestyle must amount to the highest…
A mountain of dimes with, a pile of pennies and bills…
But I can’t get my mind off my town, even though many get killed…
Descending and ill, my mental was beginning to shift…
Everything I looked at was either Spinning or flipped…
A sickening pit I called my room caused me ache and impatience…
And the president of my company told me to take a vacation…
My fam ain’t with me, so damn that city…
But something makes me want to return to it, and the land ain’t pretty…
So I called up an old friend, to see if I could stop off…
And his daughter answered the phone; to tell me he was shot…
Whatever, I wasn’t worried, we hadn’t talked in years…
I was as happy as ever, I didn’t even drop a tear…
I asked to go visit their home as I was sittin’ alone…
I felt I had the perfect life, yet I was missin’ a soul…
So I packed my things in a suitcase with my gat and bling…
Cracked my knucks, even threw in a wooden bat to swing…

Imagine heading back to a home where white chalk is the impression…
A million faces gazing on the sidewalk with no expression…
You condemn me cuz you’ve got a crutch for every toe…
And I don’t have any crutches let alone know where to go…
It’s like a war fought continuous and the sides are getting deeper…
The gang violence forced the crypt keeper to stab the grim reaper…
Waterfalls of steamy slime splash through the curb’s gutter…
And with no freedom of speech to speak out, the word’s stutter…
The metro busses stop for no one, and they run more fucked…
Trains don’t work cuz the conductor’s duct tape the doors shut…
I’d call a cab but someone’s sleepin’ in the phone booth…
And that’s there home too, as they lay covered in boxes…
I’m too scared to move him; I can see a shotgun under his pockets…
There’s a farmer’s harvest unemployment line in the back street…
And a main part of town to view families doin’ crappy…
And where’s the crack been, this whole city’s a freak show…
Where everyone from junkies to losers to the creeps go…
There’s no way out, just hope for dough, and you’ve gotta cope alone…
Cuz there’s no hospital’s here.. Just endless broken homes…
The street’s are filled with the dusty December air…
Nothin’ is where I remember, except violence everywhere…
But the courts stayed put, the sport’s played good…
Ain’t took a shot in a few years.. My forced game should…
Still be alright, but not the NBA image’s self…
The only place this place resembles, is no different from hell…
I’ve got a game goin’ quickly, plain, old and simply…
But I hear among the voices a few know my name with me…

Old friends are no more, just schoolmate’s and addicts…
As I see weapons drawn and I knew its entrapment…
The red’s hit the blue’s, til the blue’s became bloody…
And the red’s didn’t know to help or keep gunning…
And I got mixed up in this all, I don’t know how it happened…
All I saw was a random look at me, and then the clappin’…
But I recognized the face, the guy was straight frontin’…
It was my cousin.. Damn, I knew I forgot something…
My fam was left in this dump, as I kept livin’ lush…
And thought to myself, I was at best just a punk…

eh

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Voted For: Os1ris

Os1ris- Ok Dope Drop. I liked the Imagery it was decent very detailed like. Need to work on the Emotion, but you had a little going there. The Best Aspect in your verse was the Imagery. Next time put some Metaphors, similies. More wordplays to expand your Imagery. The Concept was very decent and different.


BlackQueen- Alright I liked your verse. Good Imagery, very good. I liked the Concept (What can 1 Dollar do?). Emotion could be Upp a little. Vocab can be Upp too. There's isnt Much to say...Just add Metaphors and Similies Like I told os1ris to expand your imagery more decently.

Overall- I vote os1ris he had a nice detailed imagery verse. I liked his concept too, very original. Some Parts you had Emotion and That's why I'm Giving you the vote. Blackqueen You had good Imagery, but Emotion wasn't there, Kinda Lacked. Os1ris had Emotion much better than your's so...VOte os1ris.

Both drop good verses.

Return a fav...Blah! 1

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nice job uppin for fam................................

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I hope yo ugly dickriding ass loses this shit.....