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Old 09-13-05, 12:22 AM   #1
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aight yo
i dropped feedback on that IKE song and on the Omen song i will leave links by the end of th enight

the song here is called what do you do

i worte as i dont knwo why i wrote it, lol

heres the link

and its just a verse and a chorus somehtingfor my mixtape
http://www.soundclick.com/djemsce
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Old 09-13-05, 02:41 AM   #2
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this was an aight drop...the hooks pretty good...i'd prob say work on ya flow some...lyrics were aight...emotion was aight...mic presence was also pretty good...ya flow needs a lil bit more work and all them dubs or whatever need to match the speed at what ur actually spitting it the first time...keep at it fam and keep droppin...rtf on "Royaltee Mafia"
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Old 09-13-05, 02:46 AM   #3
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yo i never do songs liek this that is why i said i have no idea why i wrote it...and i wrote this verse to a differnt beat...lol

i will RTF
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im feelin the beat...its aright.....

i kinda like your voice...kinda high pitched...i dunno...its coo....

Hook...is for real catchy....good job on that....

you can work on your flow some...although its not bad.....lyrically its coo...no complaints....mic presence is there...delivery is there....just work some on your flow....and youll be aright man....


PLEASE RTF with some feed on my new track.....1st Lady - Missing You RMX ft. Ike

thanks
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