Battle Rules:

6 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
3-0 Ko
4-1 ko
Battle Will Be Closed If Goes On for more than 21 days

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 10-23-05 at 12:53 AM

Must drop verse in 120 minutes after check in.


Win by 3-0 KO

Slash has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-22-05 10:58 PM.

Satans Spawn has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-22-05 11:06 PM.

CENTER]Yo

Im Spittin Off Quick .......Rippin The Tip Of Yo Head From Yo Body
Slash Dont Punch.. He Got More Kickz That White Women In Karate
Ill expose Yo Wack Ass Rymes And Make Yo Lyrics "Nude To RV"
And You Know Me & Yo Girl Been Knockin More "Hills" Than "Dorathy"
My Words Speak Louder Than My Action So Im Makin Sure You Hear Me
Im Puttin So Many Wholes In You Niggas Swearin You a Transpearacy

-Finish-[/CENTER]

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Spawns An Old Comic Book
Rest U Should Get

Check It


Go Fist To Fist Lets Toss-The-Tools-Quick Get Flossed-Wit-Two-Clips //
Like "Old Men" U Tryin To Come Off Hard But Uz Soft-As-Stools-Bitch //
I Was Told-Ya-Wack So Dawg I Been Holdin-Back Bustin Flowz-An-Caps //
Get Scold-An-Smacked Comic Books Man? Aint You A Lil Old-For-That //
Like A Retarded Dentist U Just Tryin-To-Floss U Get Tagged-Witta-Loss //
Down Right Blasphomous When Satans Spawn Gets His Back-On-Cross // (Crucified)

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Voted For: Satans Spawn

Go Fist To Fist Lets Toss-The-Tools-Quick Get Flossed-Wit-Two-Clips //
Like "Old Men" U Tryin To Come Off Hard But Uz Soft-As-Stools-Bitch //
2..punch is played to shit and the 1st line is just pointless multis.
I Was Told-Ya-Wack So Dawg I Been Holdin-Back Bustin Flowz-An-Caps //
Get Scold-An-Smacked Comic Books Man? Aint You A Lil Old-For-That //
4....decent punch,but 1st line wuz filler.
Like A Retarded Dentist U Just Tryin-To-Floss U Get Tagged-Witta-Loss //
Down Right Blasphomous When Satans Spawn Gets His Back-On-Cross //
1...this wuzn't a punch...doesn't diss.

Im Spittin Off Quick .......Rippin The Tip Of Yo Head From Yo Body
Slash Dont Punch.. He Got More Kickz That White Women In Karate
4...ok..
Ill expose Yo Wack Ass Rymes And Make Yo Lyrics "Nude To RV"
And You Know Me & Yo Girl Been Knockin More "Hills" Than "Dorathy"
5...decent..
My Words Speak Louder Than My Action So Im Makin Sure You Hear Me
Im Puttin So Many Wholes In You Niggas Swearin You a Transpearacy
3...not feelin it,seemed to be more of a threat.

Ok..Satan Spawn got this..
Slash...
I think your rhyme scheme is fucking you up.Your puttin too much multis in one bar(2 lines).Look at ur 2nd bar..6 multis..3 sllyables each?..NO.And some of ur lines were played..like the old men one.The comic book line could have been decent.But...you didn't use it right..

Vote-Satans Spawn
Drop a vote in the link below....
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=211896

Voted For: Satans Spawn

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=211555
^^^
RTF Or vote will be removed

Stanza:
Im Spittin Off Quick .......Rippin The Tip Of Yo Head From Yo Body
Slash Dont Punch.. He Got More Kickz That White Women In Karate
^
nah wasnt feelin it.

Ill expose Yo Wack Ass Rymes And Make Yo Lyrics "Nude To RV"
And You Know Me & Yo Girl Been Knockin More "Hills" Than "Dorathy"
^
that was aight I guess.

My Words Speak Louder Than My Action So Im Makin Sure You Hear Me
Im Puttin So Many Wholes In You Niggas Swearin You a Transpearacy
^
your best bar

weak verse,. but you ez got the win, expected better from you stanza.


slash:
Go Fist To Fist Lets Toss-The-Tools-Quick Get Flossed-Wit-Two-Clips //
Like "Old Men" U Tryin To Come Off Hard But Uz Soft-As-Stools-Bitch //
^
nice multies, 2nd line made me laugh a little..

I Was Told-Ya-Wack So Dawg I Been Holdin-Back Bustin Flowz-An-Caps //
Get Scold-An-Smacked Comic Books Man? Aint You A Lil Old-For-That //
^
nah, wasnt feelin it, could of used the concept better than you did.

Like A Retarded Dentist U Just Tryin-To-Floss U Get Tagged-Witta-Loss //
Down Right Blasphomous When Satans Spawn Gets His Back-On-Cross //
^
dope julties, weak punch

stanza gets the win, but barely.

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..I Smoke..A Large Portion Of Cheeba...My Gun Games Sick...Like A Cough And A...Fever

dope MULTIES****

Da fuck is a jultie?

my bad, yo.

rtf, word.

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..I Smoke..A Large Portion Of Cheeba...My Gun Games Sick...Like A Cough And A...Fever

I RTf To NK But Buck Marley That Not even a Battle with you in it are you sure that's the link and if so I still cant vote in that battle someone has me blacklisted

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Voted For: Satans Spawn

Im Spittin Off Quick .......Rippin The Tip Of Yo Head From Yo Body
Slash Dont Punch.. He Got More Kickz That White Women In Karate

VS

A shiity structured, sick flow verse...with no punches

SS actually had punches and a personal so he takes this one,
no hate...please rtf in sig ASAP mate.

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Daubs MySpace

Sorry Daubs I Already Voted In Two Of Those Battles IN Your Sig And I Cant Vote In One Bcuz of My Post count

Sorry

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http://community.rapverse.com/showb...776#post2455776

vote on that please.....

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Daubs MySpace

I Already Voted on That ..................Sorry ....Anyother way I Can RTF or you can Just Hold me too it

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Voted For: Satans Spawn

Slahsh-you just str8 killed em wit ya multies...but i think thats all you had..your punches/personals didnt seem to really come through..you had some good ones..but mostly just blabberin on about nothing...gotta focus more on humiliatining your oopponent..overall man 6/10

satans spawn- Your verse was pretty good....you had some good punches and wordplay...flowed goood...and really focussed on your opponent..didnt get too carried away with multis...your flow was on point structurre was good no really stretched lines..overall 7/10

v/satans spawn

rtf in sig ............1

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