Battle Rules:

6 - 10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 10-02-05 at 04:37 PM

Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in.

_Bil_@l_ has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-01-05 04:37 PM.

this may be my first time but i know im better then ur ass
save urself the embarresment and jus say pass
from u im fukin expecting sum nursery rhyme
cuz in this battle im da one who'll shine
u think u a gangsta, u think u from da hood
man u make VANILLA ICE look good

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Drop Dead has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-02-05 09:24 AM.

- Drop Dead -

..‘Points On The Board’? You’ll Jus Tremble-From-The-Flames,
N “Under, Score Throughout” Like The ‘Symbols-N-Ya-Name’..
..‘Interest In This’, Punches?.. Mine-Made-Ladder-Size-Dents,
When They Beat “Bil, Bored” Like ‘Highway-Advertisements’..
..Stick ‘2000 Pound Knives’ In Ya Flesh ‘Till Ya Critical-Riggor,
Horror?... I’m Leavin’ “@l, Sharp Ton” Like ‘Political-Figures’..
..By ‘Range Of Traits’ We Know Ya Lines-Gonna-So-Be-Wack,
‘Fuck It’, ‘Till D “Whore, A Scope” Like ‘Signs-Of-The-Zodiac’..
..Not Just ‘Payin’ You A Loss’, The Patience-Blurrs-And-Sinks,
‘Till Dead’ll “Put For, In Bil” Like ‘Another Nation’s-Currency’..

Only Read If You Didn't Get The Wordplay...
*_ = An Underscore. Under Score, Not Gain Votes.
*Bill Boards = Advertisements You See On The Highway.
*Al Sharpton = A Political Figure, 2000 Pounds = A Ton.
*Horoscope = Zodiac Signs. Range Of Traits, Scope.
*Put For Shots In Bil, Foreign Bill. Self Explanitory.

Blah...

aite people come on letz get some votes in here...

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........can y'all please gimme some feedback? cuz itz ma first battle nd i wanna improve

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Voted For: _Bil_@l_

Poll z

Voted For: _Bil_@l_

You produced a good battle for your first one, keep it up and you'll elevate

Both Votes Are DQ'd.. Nice Try Noobs, But Learn How To Vote FaGGots......

- Dead

Voted For: Drop Dead

dropdead-once again you have those things, lol it annoys me...but this time your verse prevails..you have good punches good personals...good structure...good flow lol....overall a pretty decent drop man...one sided battle.....7/10

Bil@l-your verse was sub-par, i feel your structure was poor and i could not flow to it...your punches were mild and hardly felt....your personals...well there were none fo real man...you need to elevate 2/10

v/drop dead

rtf within 48 hours or say bye bye to this vote

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A LIFE OF CHRYME

Voted For: Drop Dead

Lmfao at people voting against D.D.

Completely one-sided

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Voted For: Drop Dead

learn how to use multis right dumb ass bilal i know u but still i aint votin for ya u can do better than that n drop dead learn how to multi thats all

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OYD MAFIA

Voted For: Drop Dead

this may be my first time but i know im better then ur ass
save urself the embarresment and jus say pass
0....no punch watsoeva in this bar
from u im fukin expecting sum nursery rhyme
cuz in this battle im da one who'll shine
0...self glorifing
u think u a gangsta, u think u from da hood
man u make VANILLA ICE look good
2...finnaly a diss!......too bad it's played

..‘Points On The Board’? You’ll Jus Tremble-From-The-Flames,
N “Under, Score Throughout” Like The ‘Symbols-N-Ya-Name’..
3...meh,decent wordplay..didn't connect as a punch.
..‘Interest In This’, Punches?.. Mine-Made-Ladder-Size-Dents,
When They Beat “Bil, Bored” Like ‘Highway-Advertisements’..
4...multis ain't workin,in my opinion..seems forced.But the punch was nice.
..Stick ‘2000 Pound Knives’ In Ya Flesh ‘Till Ya Critical-Riggor,
Horror?... I’m Leavin’ “@l, Sharp Ton” Like ‘Political-Figures’..
3...wasn't feeling this.
..By ‘Range Of Traits’ We Know Ya Lines-Gonna-So-Be-Wack,
‘Fuck It’, ‘Till D “Whore, A Scope” Like ‘Signs-Of-The-Zodiac’..
4..multis were better in this line,punch was ite
..Not Just ‘Payin’ You A Loss’, The Patience-Blurrs-And-Sinks,
‘Till Dead’ll “Put For, In Bil” Like ‘Another Nation’s-Currency’..
4...decent.

Ok..one sided..
bil....
In a 6-10 line battle...neva go 6...always go 10.Don't eva give the oppenent the advantage.Ur 1st 2 bars didn't diss at all.One self glorified and the other said NOTHING.Ur 3rd bar was ur best one...but too bad...it's played.
Drop Dead...
Decent spit overall.You bassically won this battle due to a weak oppenent who doesn't know what a punch is..Soooooo

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