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Old 10-15-05, 10:32 PM   #1
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Buckin Up(U Leave Feed I'll RTF)

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yessuh just like it says i'll return the favor..alright peep out my new song "buckin up" and leave some feed and i'll get back too you

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Old 10-16-05, 01:11 AM   #2
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uppin up on this shit come on peeps
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Old 10-16-05, 09:08 AM   #3
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listenin...beat dope love dark shit...seem good quality vocals,damb u fit dark shit its dope you flow well most itmes....go offf a lil good lyrics nice delivery good emotion fits the dark shit yo rtf on my Fame Existance.........One.
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Old 10-16-05, 02:28 PM   #4
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lol @ "I used to be a bitch and run from my problems"
but yo, you sound JUST like this nigga name Eric that live around here. and Eric sounds EXTREMELY white
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If you do kegel excercises, you would be able to do something similar without having to hold your tip shut with your hand. After you've been doing them, hold off ejaculating as long as you can to really let the pressure build and then aim for your girlfriend's eye and let 'er rip.. You might get lucky and shoot her eye out. That's probably exaggerating it a bit, but it will still be hilarious
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Old 10-17-05, 09:35 AM   #5
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^^thats nice i could really care less what you think

anyways upping
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Old 10-17-05, 06:31 PM   #7
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^^yeah thats what you think.....stfu and leave internet geek...get off my nuts hater
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Old 10-17-05, 11:10 PM   #8
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uppin once again lets get some real feedback
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Old 10-18-05, 12:06 AM   #9
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ok listening........

beat is dark....coo feel to it....

Hook is ok...mainstream feel to it....i think itd sound good if it was proffesionally done....

verse....ehh lyrically not too good...delivery is actually pretty good for this beat..flow could be touched up a lil bit...its ok....dont get me wrong....but it could be touched up a bit...

presence could be upped a lil bit id say...sound a lil more excited man...


overall not a bad track...keep workin
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Old 10-18-05, 04:06 PM   #11
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beat is appropriate for this type of track


ur flow is nice in it

delivery appropriate


lyrics are mundane...but that's the southern style, IMO


very well done...just not my style


RTF please on my HERE'S THE BEST TRACK


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Old 10-18-05, 06:18 PM   #12
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lol i remember u agez ago talkin bout how u n your daddy had made a wesite together lol ye im sure sum1 who did that slangs on the corner all the time

i never said nothing about me and my dad..my dads dead dude
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Old 10-18-05, 07:01 PM   #13
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thanks for all the feed everyone uppin
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Old 10-18-05, 07:35 PM   #14
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some clean shit man i was diggin the crunk shit
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Old 10-18-05, 08:11 PM   #15
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^^thanks 4 the feed...if you got somthing u need replies on tell me if you respond i will
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