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Old 10-16-05, 02:28 PM   #1
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Jason Has To Die(diss track)
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i left feed on intermental feat implicit and drama queen's work your shit

oh and this song is incomplete, i just never finished it so

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Old 10-16-05, 02:50 PM   #2
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Old 10-16-05, 05:07 PM   #3
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come on i always leave feed and no one and replying you fucking assholes
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Old 10-16-05, 05:19 PM   #4
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beats decent..

cool intro

cool hook,

nice effects on the vocals...am feelin the mixing and background effects

lunch line was nice, flows decent.

Pretty good track, good shit.
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Old 10-16-05, 09:54 PM   #5
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Old 10-16-05, 11:14 PM   #6
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Listening...

Damn...likin this beat so far...

Intro sets the topic that I was guessin...

Is that the hook in the beginning..?

Pretty decent flow...haha some funny punches in there...LMFAO at your closer...A pretty nice track...delivery and emotion were lacking a bit I thought...dubs were WAY too loud though I'm afraid.

But overall, good track, keep it up.
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Old 10-17-05, 02:52 PM   #8
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beat is dope..
I know how much you hate this guy..
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im def feelin the intro...

LMAOOOO these lyrics funny
let this boy hear it
flow good

good shit
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Old 10-17-05, 04:46 PM   #9
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thanksss upping on this
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Old 10-17-05, 07:28 PM   #10
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Hmm somin i noticed on this, your voice faded in and out really awkwardly, the flow was alright. after you did the first hook there and then layered your verse wit that gurl/normal voice it sounded wierd. the lyrics are actually pretty good. the beat is pretty good too, i can see your coming along way with your audio skills I'm glad you never quited. but anyway props and this is a pretty good song man.

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Old 10-17-05, 07:34 PM   #11
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the beats pretty ill...ya need too work on mixing....the beginning flow is pretty cool...if its the hook its a nice melody with the beat....ya lyrics were decent...not too shabby..ya coulda used a bit more emotion in it....but ya switch ups were good...this is an other track that i can say u gettin better on...overrall not too bad fam.....nice diss track...keep um coming

overall-7.3/10

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Old 10-17-05, 08:11 PM   #12
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LMAo yo nice lyriks

the beat was koo but i herd better from you

this was a koo piece u served da kat,everything was on point!nice effects!shyt once again another dope drop!hey RTF in ma ( from da hood )
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Old 10-19-05, 05:00 PM   #13
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Old 10-19-05, 10:11 PM   #14
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ok listening....beat is good....

damn hook is nice man....good job on that....

your dubs are a lil bit off on a few parts.....

delivery is ok...

the end of the 1st verse...flow falls off a bit...you kinda try n let the beat catch up with you....

ehh wasnt feeling the closing thing..where you kinda sang....


overall...the hook stood out on this track...props on that...
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Old 10-22-05, 02:49 PM   #15
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