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Old 05-30-06, 11:28 PM   #1
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aborted thesis

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“Do you not know that your bodies are members of Christ himself?” -1 Corinthians 6:15(a)

(......A Plan aborted!! I thought my mother loved me.....)
...Divine grace inclines base to allow me to enter in her thigh space
A mind state questioned as around the egg I go with a spry rate
Sat trapped and cramped in between the masks of clamps
Eons pass, but surely i sit there growing fast and vamped
Tasked in that, i develop a spine and start whippin apt and amped
She walks placid, i feel all her tremors as i kick in her small stomach
Thriving so much...my arms go and move, a flick and the wall plummets
Visions claustrophobic, I’m lost and folded, swimming there tossed and molded
In a dream in this abyss i see God has reached n finally crossed this bold kid
My livin’ vision’s condition lists these minimal constrictions
Pitiful renditions that will shock you wit up most petitions
... ... ...
{..I open my eyes slowly but surely.....and i see a light!!..}
..
Out of the womb, i slowly crawl out and My eyes concentrate.......
.
I’m wrapped partially in swaddling clothes under an old stable
A red robe throttled to swallowing prose sundered on both tables
I see the North star to show a prominence for something
And three kings bowing to me, in Judah a providence of nothing
Anonymous in dumb things, I see in my destiny no stopping this in front, see
Its crayz and zany but i see the masked man with scissors and clips
Then it hit me, the empty prophecy in the scriptures that’s ripped
In pictures thats gripped, I see Satan on the face of His mixture and lips
..
.
{..he grabs me....holding me down while his greed takes over...}
He sticks the scissors in back of my skull, a track to the hull and the tingling of life leaves as i see one last blast to the null//
His knife lacerates my arm, while the plasma falls to the ground. Mauled all around and it was the whisper of sweet death where i heard the call of the sound//
Stood tall in the bound...as i choked on the acid and bile, a death placid and mild? my intestines fell out, but he picked it up and packed it in style.//
Neck twisted 180 degrees for a reverse psychology, with a perverse slight call to be, he used a drill machine to invert my biology//
Its tight at all to breathe...whimpering as he drills a knife in the middle of my chest, shits a riddle to the rest, how i never fought back in the fiddle of a mess//
Its simple yet complex, as my face swam in my mothers blood, as he took my skull and ran it to the smothered mud...//

.
.
{.. “Almost done says the masked man”..}
{..the rest was just a blur, the mutilation of innocence commenced..}
{..after The masked man left me half in my womb, and half on the swaddling clothes..}
{and stands there smirking in triumph}
.
.
Mary lays on her side in grief, while Joseph stares in complete awe
Seeing the tares that excrete raw, embedded in soul on for what they just saw
..Mary muttered in delusion, “the world has now seen HIS thesis”
The doctor said, “no, but Look.....Here is Your beautiful Baby Jesus”


-reason o6-
-Vanguard-
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to my fellow reader, well you may say this is a played topic, but i took a very different approach then most would... there are many different messages that people could take from this piece. the message that i wanted to incorporate in this piece was that even for those christians that are semi religious to take a look before they argue for abortion... because you are all a member of Jesus's body, and there are many other messages that one can take from this. thats the beauty of writing and art. read and take what you want from it..

Urz Truly,
...-reaSon o6-

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Old 05-31-06, 09:04 PM   #2
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upz? plz and thanks
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...dropping heads left and right like ambidextrous guillotine workers...

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2 : containing no flaw or error
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Old 05-31-06, 09:24 PM   #3
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*grabs magnifying glass*

il hit this up tommorow or suntin.
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Old 05-31-06, 09:30 PM   #4
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lol ok thanks
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...I See Jesus Walk On The Blood Of Our Ancestors...


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Old 05-31-06, 10:54 PM   #5
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Damn Meth... very nice shit, like always.. keep bringing the vivid visuals lol

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{..he grabs me....holding me down while his greed takes over...}
He sticks the scissors in back of my skull, a track to the hull and the tingling of life leaves as i see one last blast to the null//
His knife lacerates my arm, while the plasma falls to the ground. Mauled all around and it was the whisper of sweet death where i heard the call of the sound//
Stood tall in the bound...as i choked on the acid and bile, a death placid and mild? my intestines fell out, but he picked it up and packed it in style.//
Neck twisted 180 degrees for a reverse psychology, with a perverse slight call to be, he used a drill machine to invert my biology//
Its tight at all to breathe...whimpering as he drills a knife in the middle of my chest, shits a riddle to the rest, how i never fought back in the fiddle of a mess//
Its simple yet complex, as my face swam in my mothers blood, as he took my skull and ran it to the smothered mud...//


that shit was RAW son hahahah...

keep em comin!

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Old 06-01-06, 11:49 AM   #6
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thanks sir!
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...Vanguard....Its In Ya Mouth Beeyotch...
...dropping heads left and right like ambidextrous guillotine workers...

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...I See Jesus Walk On The Blood Of Our Ancestors...


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Old 06-02-06, 10:37 PM   #7
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upz again.
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...Vanguard....Its In Ya Mouth Beeyotch...
...dropping heads left and right like ambidextrous guillotine workers...

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...I See Jesus Walk On The Blood Of Our Ancestors...


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2 : containing no flaw or error
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Old 06-02-06, 11:10 PM   #8
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that was mad nice mane i was feelin it all tha way threw dawg

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