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Old 10-29-05, 12:44 PM   #1
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Old 10-29-05, 01:58 PM   #2
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Listening...

Beat is coo...verse comes in...delivery is lacking...you sound very monotonous. Flow is decent, multies is coo...but damn...that delivery is killin this. Oh wait it picks up...actually it picks up quite a bit. But it's still not the greatest delivery...anyway, lyrics are coo, overall a pretty good track. Whoa...what the fuck was that at the end..? Haha...whatever...

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Old 10-29-05, 03:27 PM   #3
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not really feelin the beat... it is different though... boost ya vocals ...i could barely hear ya.. boost ya highs a lil bit also... sounds kinda muffled in my speakers.... i'll holla when ya finish mixing it... can't give a real honest feed without really hearing what you sayin' nah mean?
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Old 10-29-05, 11:29 PM   #4
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vocal quality is bad cuz it sounds muffled...work on that

flow sounds pretty decent though

tough to decipher ur lyrics with such lackluster quality

beat is fine

not bad dawg

work on that quality


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Old 10-30-05, 06:21 PM   #5
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thx ppl....im workin on it ATM ^^
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