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Old 10-28-05, 08:39 AM   #1
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Old 10-28-05, 04:38 PM   #2
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Old 10-29-05, 05:58 PM   #3
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I like the thunder at the beggining. But the beeping horn is ANNOYING AS FUCK. Its seems alright to me besides that.
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Old 11-01-05, 10:29 AM   #4
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awwww...yu produce too....good shit


drum pattern is good...yea, the honking sound does get annoyin after a while..cuz tahts the onli sound yu got in there....yu can spit to it...i say, just add more stuff...change it up a lil...here and there...ya know

for ya 4th beat...yu doing pretty good....i've heard worse
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Old 11-01-05, 11:35 AM   #5
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well since I'm here, I'll just review all your beats, lol...

beat 1: pattern's weird, you on that "only I can spit to this" Kanye shit here ma LMAO...strings are nyce, could've chosen a better snare to go with the kick but dat kick sounds hawt girl...pretty good

beat 2: feelin' the intro and sound effects on this...not really liking the deep bass in the piano or whatever the heck it is lol...sounds like your sounds kinda off from the beat itself...not feelin' this one

beat 3: hmmm, there's a lot missing from this beat...the piano was aiight, claps even sounded decent with this but the pattern of drums then silence had me like "huh?"...it's a kew beat, but for some reason, to me, this sounds more like background music in a horror flick lol

beat 4: like the thunder at the beginning too...definetly that horn is annoying lol...if you left that out and made ya drums louder it'd be a nyce beat to freestyle to ma, pretty nyce one here...raise ya sound levels cuz the horn is the loudest thing in dis...drum patter is kewl ma, just take that horn out N make it all louder
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