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02-25-05, 11:16 PM
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That's Me
IP: 3737 CC4A
www.soundclick.com/jiddyjid
yeh, first track I left feed on Tha Q - Grimey Slap and CALI ft. Senser - Spark That Clip
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02-26-05, 08:09 AM
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You Cant Handle The Truth
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IP: 7113 B39E
feelin' the violins in this beat...LMAO @ no homo...
ya mic's clear but stop breathin' so hard on it, lol...I wasn't expecting much from you cuz the beginning was eghh, but damn, you actually got flow, hahaa...them "bite me" bars were nyce dude...usually most "faggot" lines are wack, but I liked your bars on that shit jo, lol... feelin' the hook on this too kyd, you got nyce prescence, just need a new mic...you got skiLLz dawg, why muh FUCKahs sleep when they don't recogniZe the person is beyond me...people wiilll never know any new talent on here unless you BEG their asses to give you feedback -smh- that "1st grade" line was nyce...multies are nyce in here, but your flow's better in the first verse, it's wierd this verse...your first verse was definetly better, good ish though man, I'm really feelin' you...check my jawn "Dangerous Grounds" feat. Milkman... maybe we can collab some time, get at me...
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02-26-05, 11:26 AM
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IP: 3737 CC4A
^ Thanks...muhfuckas is gay tho, I'M LOTTY MUHFUCKAS, remember that.
About the collab, if I have time, I gotchu.. uppin bish's
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02-26-05, 11:32 AM
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FiVe SoUrCe CeO
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IP: 28BD 9D87
lol @ the ramblin on at the beginnin
Get to the rappin man...cuz that build up was not happenin ur voice is good u have a good flow... more mic presence would make udope good track...but the gay bashing is not necessary.PERIOD. 1 |
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02-26-05, 11:34 AM
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The Rulers Back
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IP: 5510 817C
quality needs work flow was good overall i liked it it was coo lookin forward to the next one...
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02-26-05, 11:53 AM
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Light Weight
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IP: EA66 AD12
aight feelin the beat...
aight flow was coo..breathe control problems here and there...fell of at a few spots...delivery was ok...dont sound to comfortable on the mic...sound like you just reading of the paper...lyrics were aight...chorus was str8...you need a pop filter fam...overall i see potential just need to polish up...if you want a couple pointers holla at me...peace return the feedback http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=178661
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02-26-05, 08:38 PM
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.::Outside The Circle::.
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IP: E1D7 D0FC
wow.. more then i was expecting.. build up was wack like q said.. but damn your flow is nice.. the lyrics was nice the whole way thru.. you got a good voice for rap.. and this was really good beat choice.. good job man.. looking forward to more drops from you pz..
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02-27-05, 11:14 AM
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IP: C4A3 993F
Urrrrrrppppiiinnng...
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02-27-05, 02:58 PM
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Flyweight
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IP: A338 C9EF
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this is my basic feedback right here lyrics were str8 to me u do have potential just..get that deliveru up emotion up dont sound like u yellin make it natural and try goin over your lines before u spit them...ur lyrics are actually really good stay up
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02-27-05, 06:16 PM
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<<-Carpe Noctum->>
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IP: 3240 794D
wtf? lol@ the buildup....nice voice, good flow on this track, you had some good lines too, overall i liked this track,just work on some minor mixing problems like pops and what not, havent heard anything from you before but dope shit so far, keep it up.1
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03-04-05, 09:13 PM
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IP: 07A8 D079
i'm feeling this beat... your voice sounds fine on the track u just need help wit production.. stop singing tho.. i'm not feeling that lil' intro. your flow's pretty decent, but u can tell you just got off of text battling.. stay up tho
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03-04-05, 11:04 PM
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Engineer / Club Promoter
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IP: 74C8 66CC
Sounds liek you had 2 false starts that you tried to make into a hook. You got all sorts of quality issues on this. Read the link in my sig and save me a good 40 mins of typing but stopping moving around would the the firstmajor step. The flow was net-ish seeing that they were the exact same flow on every single line and all your lines were on a 1-syl rhymescheme. Easy to tell you did text way before you ever spit. Lyrics were pretty good and had some good content. Deliv didn't stand out to me, but was good enough to get most of the job done. Never liked the beat when 50¢ was on it and I'm still not crazy about it now. Not a GREAT track lyrically speaking, but a good one. Def could have been better and still said the same thing.
Edit: oh yeah, forgot to mention. The flow was lumpy seeing that sometimes you sped it up to try to smush all the syls in one bar then slowed it back down to the normal pace the bar right after.
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03-04-05, 11:31 PM
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The Ups and Downs of Life
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IP: 13A4 AD49
iight..
This shit was pretty good lyrically, you just need more experience mixing and spittin on the mic... Go to Audio Assistance forum and look for a thread Everything you need, and then look under cool edit, theres alot of tips in there on how to make your tracks sound more professional, and just keep spittin, try and put a lil more energy into your delivery, but u on the right path so far, good shit...1
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03-05-05, 07:07 PM
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Flyweight
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IP: 28AD 5545
feelin the beat..............i like the hook, but i didn't feel the 1st verse all that much.............call your bitch lullaby cause everybody slept with her, that was dope..........y'all gangters cause gangsters pop, another hot line........................................over all a good track but a great one, about a B maybe a B plus........
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11-04-05, 07:13 PM
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IP: 0403 BF23
upping son, real talk.
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