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11-13-05, 08:35 AM | #1 | |||||||
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Prey For Me--U.N.F- And Intermental
IP: 7517 E0CF
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www.soundclick.com/unf "Pray For Me Ft.Intermental" Plz Leave Feed I Will Rtf Left Feed On: NI,Y,Inter-So Corruptive And Spul-Diamonds Are Forever Remix Lyrics Go: [CENTER]Intro:You Gotta Pray For Me,Stay Strong,Keep Ya Head Up Homie, Yo Yo Hook x2(UNF): Homie Pray For Me,Homie When I Die(When I Die) Homie Say To Me,That You Wont Lie(You Wont Lie) Homie Pray For Me,As I Try(As I Try) Homie Play For Me,The Supply(The Supply) V1(UNF): You See,Im Nearing The End Of My Life(End Of My Life) So Imagine What The Pain And The Strife Is Like(Strife is like)(Right) My Life Is A Mystery,Dont Feel No Grief(Feel No Greif) In Fact If I Die You Should Feel Relief(Should Feel Relief)(Yeah) Road To Salvation,Judged By God(Judged By God) Taking Into Account,Drama By My Squad(Inter:Bitch Die) Guns Cocked And Fired,Sound Peirce The Night(Pierce The Night) Sounds Like Theres Gonna Be Some Shit Tonight(Aight)(Gun Sound) Shit Ma Dawgs Are Runnin From The Law(From The Law)(Sirens) And They Shot A HomeBoi(Gun Sound), The Wounded Foresaw(The Wounded Foresaw) The Damn Government,And Cops Hot On Our Tail(On Our Tail) So Prey For Me, Homie I Wont Fail(I Wont Fail) Hook x2(UNF): Homie Pray For Me,Homie When I Die(When I Die) Homie Say To Me,That You Wont Lie(You Wont Lie) Homie Pray For Me,As I Try(As I Try) Homie Play For Me,The Supply(The Supply) V2(Inter) clasp youre palms together, and storm my weather, (weather) because its pourin, but my flow is gettin better, (better) but its rainy days for brothers in poverty today, so I So I, Pray for yall today, Greed, women and weed, hold me to my knees, Feenes, bottles and teams, destroy kids dreams, If I had met a Genie, I would ask for Nine Lives, (Nine lives) But ive got Live Nines, and theres no comprimise (damn) so I stay bottled inside like a cork screw, I get hate cos im koo wit a guy that blows dudes So whatever I do, I seem to lose, It dont matter, my careers deems the truth, (truth) in the booth is where i unleash my demons, they say futures bright, but I dnt see it but I believe it, cos its a way out, its the sun replacin the same old cloud, V3(UNF): The Thunder Bolts Down,As My Crew Speeds Off(Speeds Off) The Roaring Sound,As The Engine Cough's(The Engine Coughs-Echo) The Lexus's Gears,Screeches As It Stops(As It Stops) Smashes Into The Wall,And The Bumper Drops(The Bumper Drops)(Oh Shit) We Get Out The Car,Ma Homeboi Burns It(Homeboi Burns It)(Fire Noise) We Already Told You We The Ones Who Run Shit(Who Run Shit)(Yeah) Product Of a Demon,The Soul Of The Angels Fucka Crown,Just Pass Me My Halo(My Halo-Echo)(Yeah) While My Clique Runs Around Shootin At Police(Shootin At Police-Echo)(Gun Sound) I Pray For The Unfortunate,Living On The Streets(On The Streets)(Aha) You Start On Me,Then You Pushed The Bout(Pushed The Bout) In The End Dawg,Ill Have You Praying For A Knockout(For A Knockout)(Yeah) Hook x2(UNF): Homie Pray For Me,Homie When I Die(When I Die) Homie Say To Me,That You Wont Lie(You Wont Lie) Homie Pray For Me,As I Try(As I Try) Homie Play For Me,The Supply(The Supply)[/CENTER] [CENTER] Remember I WILL Rtf
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11-13-05, 09:15 AM | #2 | |||||||
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Yeh I'm Liking the beat, it's got a snese of orginality. I think the hook is Ite, but could be alittle more catchy liek your other songs. Thought the verse were good from you and inter. Well done man, you really elevatin keep it up, yo.
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11-13-05, 10:24 AM | #3 | ||||||
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IP: 9CF2 2208
this was good.... UNF ur quality improved a heck of alot... i thought the chorus was ok except for the supply part.... cause i think u just put that to make it rhyme... UNF flowed good on his verses but intermental, you feel off in your verse near the end. Over all this was good.
8.0/10
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11-13-05, 10:27 AM | #4 | ||||
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IP: 6D5A 8A22
upppn.............
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11-13-05, 10:52 AM | #5 | |||||||
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IP: 663C A469
i usta have this beat..hot shit man !!
decent hook,i'm startin to like the flow u put on..it grows on you..ur vocals r a bit high on this nice samples...this is deff a decent track..another verse?..oh another person..his delevery is nice..laid back voice,not bad at all man.not bad at all man...overall i'm feelin' it,work on ur quality i guess..ur a good writer to..jus keep ^^'n ur shit man
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11-13-05, 10:58 AM | #6 | ||||
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IP: 6D5A 8A22
aiite i apreicate it....
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11-13-05, 11:05 AM | #7 | |||||||
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IP: 7517 E0CF
Thzx Forr The Feed Man.....
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11-13-05, 11:37 AM | #8 | |||||||
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IP: 663C A469
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=214378
RTF plz..my bad i diddnt say b4
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11-13-05, 11:47 AM | #9 | |||||||
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aight sure..........
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11-13-05, 12:33 PM | #10 | ||||||
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aint like da beat...
delievery aint that good, good editin ya did tho with da sounds and shyt hooks aigh, lyrics is nice good concepts yo holla at me
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11-13-05, 12:39 PM | #11 | |||||||
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Umm^^Yeah....Uppin
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11-13-05, 12:47 PM | #12 | ||||
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IP: 6D5A 8A22
Bro Yao did u listen to the trac???
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11-13-05, 02:41 PM | #13 | |||||||
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thx man.................upp........................... .....
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11-13-05, 03:26 PM | #14 | |||
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UNF...stop posting your lyrics...It's not a big deal and no one's gonna steal them. I just feel that people should be able to understand your lyrics from the flow...If not, then be more articulate, or they need to open their ears more.
I like some of the mixing here...Inter's adlibs in the background sounded dope to me UNF...weird...u were flowing but it jus flew by...I don't remember it ha nothing bad though Inter...flow was good...kinda got jerky in 1 spot or so UNF...ur voice is pretty NIFTY! I think this was a solid collab good job fellas work on smoothing out the edges though 1 |
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11-13-05, 03:53 PM | #15 | |||||||
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lol thx a lot Upping..................
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