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Old 11-13-05, 01:35 AM   #1
allik war
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Post back wit a new rhyme

IP: 2029 97B3

"yea nigga its dat boy"
"allik war a.k.a. raw killa"
"str8 from da dirty jersey"
"ghost ridaz 4 life"
"lets goniggaz fire dat shit up"

its allik war back wit a new rhyme,creatin murderous lines,between these lines,
my lyrical side effects cause grandma seizures blowin ya mind//
im da reaction u get from crossin knowledge n wisdom,
diploma graduatedstr8 from jersey juvenile prison,
blowin jane,switchin lanes,through da judicial system//
i go 2 da block 2 write,,load my knuckles wit lead swingin shots in da fight,
while yo writers block yo light,n these diamonds block yo sight//
im on top of the world,fast forward wit ya girl,reachin da hearts of da world//
rewind these hollow tips,reload clips,wit da taped up grips,when its action time spray da whole strip,switch da semi 2 automatic n spray da whole clip,give yo
leg whip lash,through da back of yo knee caps,sendin my hammer 2 rehab,each clip i load he relapse,back 2 his shoot'em up raps//

-hook-
its allik war back wit a new rhyme,
wit rhymes trapped in da book of time,
who's lyrics get lost between da lines,
by this hook girls ima be lost between ya thighs,
raw killa on da track writin a "true crime"



this isnt finished yet but i want ya'll opinions n if n e 1 likes it and wants 2 get up on it hit me up peace
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Old 11-15-05, 02:26 AM   #2
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come on i kno u all aint blind drop line kidz damn uppin
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Old 11-19-05, 08:55 PM   #3
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uppin dis piece give me feedback so i kno wut to n not to change 4 dis song uppin uppin peace:
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Old 11-19-05, 10:28 PM   #4
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