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11-14-05, 11:04 PM
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New to RV
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please critique my stuff
IP:
It was monday mornin' up at dawn
yawnin' same old uniform im sportin' Poptarts for breakfast same old erectness this lifestyle is so infectious head off pack some shelves wish they'd unpack themselves Doin' it to stand on my own two feet just to make my ends meat Come home to the same home grown given that relaxed feeling to my dome I spark an spark some more till im seein hore's butt naked on my floor Start driftin' into a deep sleep drop the weed on my sofa seat man im beat Wake up screamin am i in hell with fuckin' forked demons? am i dreamin? No! my house is on fire its all haywire fire burning down my damn empire Takin' a leap through the nearst window faster than a ford pinto creating a winnow |
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