Your vocals are WAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY YYYYYY too high and you need a pop filter immediately. The mic it self is relatively clear. the flow came through lumpy whne it first started but eventually got better. The cut job on the hook was anus, the second verse lyrically was fine, just general talking. The lyrics got lots of potential in some moments of it, I think you just need more mic time to learn how you come over beats and get more polish, but I can def see signs of skills breaking through. The quality is the main glare on this, then the flow - an occassional few sylables throwing things off. that's really all I can say about the track. one.

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