Diss To Kriminal

KRIMINAL thug? Just a general scrub got minimal love
For skills, best lower your pride just a thrower of jive jitterbug
Verse, thirst for fame but worse named MC’S of the month
Hunt for support a chump in court be real like a witness don’t front
I’m a brother deft and bold you best discover self control
Your clout and rhyme is out of line and seem swollen and old
I drink rum brisk you’re a dumb piss this scrub wanna tug
At microphones with force, dome off course no love
For rap just retire, I’ll strip your feathers and rip your leather
Just a dang absurd bird with no beak flow never peeks clever
A thrilling situation how you need the filling Station to inflate
Your brain pump air in your head your rap affair dead when you hate
My gift raw and ill so withdraw your skills flaws fills your fate
Bitch your whack quotes don’t attract folks, your facts only make
Me pissed you straight kiss ass for props write trash not Hip Hop
Flip flops on your feet, the slippers of Cinderella a tender fella never rip shop
Your game is demolish, brain need polish look guy go buy Esquire
Why stress and desire skills? My fire fills the air like fireworks I hire
Jerks like you to shine my shoes your rhymes lose and can’t prevail
Like Fabulous you can’t breathe or taint these rhymes bitch try inhale
Your blend fail to supply oxygen smother your verses and jail
your rhymes oh fuck whose gonna pay bale? stay stale behind bars
just a reindeer and your brain clear garbage your name Rudolph stars
the limit but you can’t pull sleighs

MY LINK (http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2543401)

some great multis, there, nice flow, structure was easy to the eye. Some really good punches and thew rhyming was sicker than sick.
few more direct personals wud have put the icing on the cake

you got some talents there bro, big time. Im gonna keep an eye out for your future drops. how long did it take you to do that?

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mediocre nukka, could of worded shit better...seem like u was tryin to go for that multie effect but came rusty when it comes to delivering the end of the line.... ok for a diss i guess... 6/10

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*Moved to disstracks*

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yeah this shit for real yo