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Old 11-24-05, 09:28 PM   #1
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only constructive critisism thanks...

Tips to improve this would also be appreciated.
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Old 11-24-05, 09:53 PM   #2
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This is one album cover I can see on a store shelf. Everything just flows so perfectly except for that PA sticker. Make it smaller. Other than that, I like it. The face in the clouds is a very nice touch.
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Old 11-24-05, 09:58 PM   #3
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I'll quickly change it thanks to your advice...


much appreciated.
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Old 11-24-05, 10:22 PM   #4
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Much better....
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Old 11-24-05, 11:10 PM   #5
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i totally agree with rev, its sick, its not over the top and un-original like alot of shit, it all works well, props
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Old 11-24-05, 11:36 PM   #6
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thanks for the feed...

If you have a gfx piece you want me to leave feedback on feel free to leave a link.
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Old 11-24-05, 11:47 PM   #7
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Would you be interested in possibly using that kind of design for a CD cover I'm gonna need?
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Old 11-24-05, 11:54 PM   #8
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Would you be interested in possibly using that kind of design for a CD cover I'm gonna need?

I'm going to be completely honest with you.
I'm not great at graphix...I'm still fairly new.
But I could try, and if that fails you can straight bite the idea of that cover.
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Old 11-24-05, 11:57 PM   #9
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But pm me and i'll give you my aim and what not.
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I just really like the design. You got AIM?
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Old 11-25-05, 12:06 AM   #11
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I just really like the design. You got AIM?

yea but i'm out for now...sorry.

I'll get at you tomorrow
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Old 11-25-05, 05:31 PM   #12
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ehh i really dont see it as all that great
i do love the concept behind it though, i think its a great idea...
but what throws the whole thing off is the amount of open space there is left..
all that black in the left and top left hand corner just makes the cover look empty
i wouldve countered it by making everything else bigger, or just made the cover smaller itself...since im assuming this is only for web purposes.
overall like i said, great concept and idea for it, but the open space really kills it for me.
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Old 11-27-05, 07:26 PM   #13
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i like it alot but its too dark and the text is blahhhhhhhhhh
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Old 11-28-05, 07:43 AM   #14
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thanks for the feed...

rememer, if you got work feel free to drop a link.
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Old 11-28-05, 08:08 AM   #15
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its straight kinda plain tho
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