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Maggot
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Pause with the muscle but there’s cause to hustle look dawg
IP: CF74 5D3A
Pause with the muscle but there’s cause to hustle look dawg
I hold a vexed ROLEX this thing ticks sick but the new analog Says Rolexes sometime tick and collapse from strain and will Harass the main time zone just to synchronize the hours to spill Into minutes, yo dawg its nice but what’s the price of this time piece? Fifty dollars aw man you fake and joking let me break open the box at least And peep at the physical crystals so Bristol on the face of the watch No pay first, aw man you out your mind and no doubt blind march To someone else with your dumb self can’t fall for that homey Just a sad misled fake with a bad headache look I suggest strongly Take some aspirins, dang life is hard for a hustler the best only// Get drastic sometimes so these are plastic rhymes for them Mastic minds like SHAKESPEARE make fakes fear and stem Corrupt like the national debt, rational yet with my flow On sick politics these tricks wallows sick with lies doe Why diss each other brisk to teach brothers how they need to act But somehow whack shit is written, facts not hitting in the feedback Their seed lack protein can’t flow mean their brain bleeds crack Disgrace and silly to place responsibility on me for those manic Lines caught up on crummy verse why find fault you the dummy First to drop some slop this? Look for a spot to piss sonny |
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Ill Nigga Alert.
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IP: 0825 899A
You bite this off another site...manye...shit iam gonna report this shit...lol...
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Maggot
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IP: CF74 5D3A
Look Turkey I Got More Than One Name Son Tell Me The Name On The Other Site Hell I'm The Originator Come On And Critique This Piece For Real
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Ill Nigga Alert.
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IP: 28AD 5545
Lol iam just messin around manye...lol...nah but ay iam done messin with you...so iam leave it all go...aight then manye..
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IP: 0100 50EE
Im not feelin it. Nothin really flows ... The lines are too long.
Keep the lines short and make your barz to the point. Instead of trying to add all these different words in there. It's fuckin it up... |
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