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Old 12-12-05, 10:33 PM   #1
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Pause with the muscle but there’s cause to hustle look dawg

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Pause with the muscle but there’s cause to hustle look dawg
I hold a vexed ROLEX this thing ticks sick but the new analog
Says Rolexes sometime tick and collapse from strain and will
Harass the main time zone just to synchronize the hours to spill
Into minutes, yo dawg its nice but what’s the price of this time piece?
Fifty dollars aw man you fake and joking let me break open the box at least
And peep at the physical crystals so Bristol on the face of the watch
No pay first, aw man you out your mind and no doubt blind march
To someone else with your dumb self can’t fall for that homey
Just a sad misled fake with a bad headache look I suggest strongly
Take some aspirins, dang life is hard for a hustler the best only//
Get drastic sometimes so these are plastic rhymes for them
Mastic minds like SHAKESPEARE make fakes fear and stem
Corrupt like the national debt, rational yet with my flow
On sick politics these tricks wallows sick with lies doe
Why diss each other brisk to teach brothers how they need to act
But somehow whack shit is written, facts not hitting in the feedback
Their seed lack protein can’t flow mean their brain bleeds crack
Disgrace and silly to place responsibility on me for those manic
Lines caught up on crummy verse why find fault you the dummy
First to drop some slop this? Look for a spot to piss sonny
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Old 12-13-05, 05:35 PM   #2
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You bite this off another site...manye...shit iam gonna report this shit...lol...
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Old 12-13-05, 09:07 PM   #3
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Look Turkey I Got More Than One Name Son Tell Me The Name On The Other Site Hell I'm The Originator Come On And Critique This Piece For Real
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Old 12-13-05, 09:23 PM   #4
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Lol iam just messin around manye...lol...nah but ay iam done messin with you...so iam leave it all go...aight then manye..
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Old 12-14-05, 04:10 PM   #5
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Im not feelin it. Nothin really flows ... The lines are too long.
Keep the lines short and make your barz to the point. Instead of trying to add all these different words in there. It's fuckin it up...
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