YZE on first verse..im on 2nd, then we split third verse..i rlly like this track..holla atcha boi...1


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beat reminds me of this song from the 80s that goes, "OO OOO HERE WE GOOOO"...


LMAO

O shit...I didn't realize I was dead until I heard the hook and it's "HERE SHE COMES" not "HERE WE GO" hahaaaaaaaaa

daz so funny

wow...kinda funny hearin u curse Inter...jus cuz Im not used to it...

ur flow is good...but the "UH HU HUH" leadin into ur verse was kinda off a tad

lyrics were good


I love this beat...cuz I love 80s MUSIC


good 1

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thanks dawg......lol yea OOOH HERE SHE COME

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aight peepin now

Production: The production is pretty good i liek the intro:8/10

Flow:1rst:I like his flow he sounds reall polished:8/10,You had a nice flow lol i like that effect u had on that it was hot with the stretch:7.5/10

Pressense:1Rst:it was good....rode beat well:8/10,Your pressense was a lot better i was feeling urs more:8.5/10

Emotion:1rst:It was good sounded well spit:8/10,ur emotion could have been a bit better but it was good:7.8/10

Lyrics:1rst:Nothin i remembers but 7/10,your lyrics were more polished up i was feeling um more:8/10

Overall:this is a pretty solid song was feelin it man..keep these tracks coming:7.5/10

WORD STAY UP AND KEEP DOING YA THING

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cmon why yall breezin this...................ill rtf def

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Checkin

beats Nice

Never heard Original

When You Come On Your Flow Is on Point

Dleiverys Nice

Emotions Dope

Presence Is nice

I Think Youve Fully Developed your Style

3rd Verse

yeah I like Its Split

Lmao@Hook Haha

Good Work


8/10

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beat is nice, but like pop song type

1st verse

gd voice, flow is kl, both of u got gd quality to this..

2nd flow is kl,but i think u did better with 3rd verse

3rd first guy aint that gd,but inters part sounds kl

hook is nice cauze i like the original song

not bad song...kinda kl i think....nice job

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