Track for Spoken Def Elevation Tourney

Just some brag and boast shit, didn't really pay much attention to lyrics due to my exams and all...hectic times!

But check it out, I'll return the favor!

RAISE THE STAKES - DQ

Links of feedback:

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=216320

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=216069

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Yeah!

word to the production Lmao

Flows aight in first verse u seemed to have placed it wrong i know it can be right i herd it before

hooks dope love it..gives it that spice lol

2nd verse flowss wayyyyy better

right

delvierys nice,could use a lil more though

emotions koo,ggod for this type of track

lyrics are koo Lmfao@Shared Your mama

presence is nice the way u presented yourself was fitting on this track

your voice fits it well as well

good track overall i'd give it a 8

just work on your delivery,i dunno seems a lil low

flows good wen its normal ,fuck the timing place lol

yeah as i said before PRODUCTION IS HOT lol

Well keep up

good work dq

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OYD MAFIA

Word, special thanks to Mr. B Daniel for the mixing hehe

Well only the verses though, the rest I done myself haha...but still thanks man

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Listening...

Beat is decent...

Well...your delivery is lacking on the first verse. It just sounds like you just woke up or something...lyrics are pretty main stream. Flow is choppy...hook comes in...not feelin it honestly...too many effects. Second verse...crazy panning effects. Flow is better, but still choppy, and off beat in a few places. Quality is decent...heard a couple major pops, but decent shit.

Keep it up.

Return the Favor on my track "Louis" please and thank you.

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Thanks for feed...Upping...

LE, I'll return feed this weekend...gotta study for exams now...

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That high pitched voice shit at the intro is WIGGEDY. people stopped pumpin that high pitch shit since like 2003.

This beat is iconic, so you really better kill this one.

Your mic has a MEAN buzz on it, but it's actually clear otherwise. Your flow got better, but its still off. the lyrics hold up no prob, but damn, that's enough of this. I turned it off ,and here's why: the flow is 1syl which is for the 80's get with the times. This soudns liek you didn't write it over a beat and the flow was WAY too lumpy. To be honest, for what this beat is and what it means to my generation, this is almost a disgrace to Wu. The good new is that you got much better since the last trakc I heard from you where you were just talking over the beat at your own pace, but the bad news is that, on the real, this track is dookie because of the flow, the 1syl rhymescheme, and that occasional buzz on the mic. Your hook should have had SLIGHTLY more reverb put to it and another layer ov vocals under it so it didn't sound like it was all one continual spit. Also, you need to learn to swith up your flow and change your momentum, because all your tracks deliver the exact same, like Triple N. You also spit from end to end on both tracks, there's no breaks, no change of pace, no moment for a listeners mind to catch a breath, etc, liek you'll go right out of the last word on the 16th bar immediately into the first word of the hook, then after the last word of the hook, immediately into the first word of the next verse, and so on. Like John LEgend says - take it slooowww-owww. oh oohh oooohhh. Next time DQ..take it slow.

Real feed as always, because I'm tired of seeing people sugar coat shit. Either that or they dont' have any idea what the hell they're leaving feed about.

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