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11-12-05, 05:17 PM | #1 | ||||
.L.B.S. PUSHER.
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The Past.
IP: 4283 C604
True love is really rae to find yet its so hard, you couldn't compare it its one of a kind, everything new turns out old like a lost memory, tears dropped since you havent been remebering me |
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12-01-05, 10:35 PM | #3 | ||||
New to RV
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IP: 9523 808A
likein the poem short but good .......... nicce... GK
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12-11-05, 03:19 AM | #4 | ||||
.L.B.S. PUSHER.
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IP: 4283 C604
thanks for the comments. uppin for some more here..
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12-11-05, 01:42 PM | #5 | |||||
All these Dead Presidents
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IP: 20E8 620D
Very short but much more emotional than the other 2. Quite honestly, this may be your best poem out of the three I have just read. Your vocab is much more colorful and your structure was unique. It was heart-felt and also had a sweet ending.
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12-14-05, 07:31 PM | #6 | ||||
.L.B.S. PUSHER.
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IP: 295D 9CED
LOL!! it was Very Short i already knowticed buh well . lol. thanks.
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