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12-11-05, 06:36 AM
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I have a lot to learn...
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Status Diss
IP: C98F 1FA2
www.soundclick.com/onemb
This is pretty old, but I only just uploaded it. I figured I need some constructive feed. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=212591 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=267329
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12-11-05, 08:12 AM
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Nt Your Average
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IP: F4B7 095C
Hmm
Listenin Beats Koo Punches Hit Mostly They Koo Flowss Good Falls Off Once Deliverys Aight Could Be upped Upp The Volume Emotions Ok Could Be Upped You Sound COnfident But You Need cTo Upp Your emotion Good Track  Overall:7/10 Goo Punches Rtf Here Plz http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=216787
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12-11-05, 08:57 AM
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OYD
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IP: 1ADC A69C
I do believe this is the 1st piece of yours I've heard.
Yes...status got issues...MAD ISSUES... ur voice reminds me of GDeuce with an accent... Vocals need to be dubbed or amped or both to up your presence disses seem personal ur rhyming is pretty coo not bad not great = decent 1 |
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12-11-05, 11:56 AM
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Hell yeah
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IP: 1EC3 DBAD
fuck the beat is ill, quality is iight, flow is off and on, nice punchs, hate status thats why i listened to the track, have prop hearin the lyrics some times but still tight, overall pretty good track
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12-11-05, 01:23 PM
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One Mic
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IP: BB77 E4BA
ahhh jedi mind tricks beat, that shits ill...
this sounds pretty gud actually, flow is kinda on and off for most of the time, ya had some nice punchlines in there, quality aint too bad at all. nice diss track 8/10
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