This Song old as hell but its jus a lil somethin to show yall what im about...here go tha link http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=2525823

here go tha lyrics....


ChorusGhostwriter)

Dont let them niggaz gas you,we'll blast you up/
Two 4 5s with a mask and a truck/
Err-body wanna be real til they get killed/
Even I could die tonight so i stay with my steal


Verse 1: (Me)

That bullshit im on right now niggaz I've been on it/
Niggaz get K'O'ed from tha lyrics i hit them with/
Rhymes are crazy so they alwayz say that im infinite/
Should go to jail for tha way im rapin instruments/

Panties hit tha floor as soon as I step up in this bitch/
Suck a tit,beat her clit,bust a nut and I'm gone/
Niggaz think i gotta bomb tha way they blow up my phone/
Bitches say I'm mean becuz I leave them playin alone/

For that shit bitch...I aint takin you home/
Niggaz wanna come and get me?..I stay wit my chrome/
Wrist lit up!..man fuck shinnin I glow/
Sick as fuck!..at this rhymin...I know/

Hell I dont even have to use my mind when flow/
Get a pen cuz when it hits tha line it jus goes/
Nine on my waist..so you know I'm ready for beef/
Fuckin wit me...I'll put some more chrome on ya teeth/

Chorus 2x

Verse 2: (Me)

I be tha first to blast it son and tha last to run/
Niggaz hit tha floor before I even grab my gun/
Now I wanna know who tha fuck gassed you up/
Cuz Imma run up on that nigga when tha gats are tucked/

Tha only way you gonna blow! is when you suckin my dick/
Fuckin with this...you betta go and get a rubba bitch!!/
You think I'm a joke?...Nigga...Hardy har/
You'll take more shots than white girls at Mardi Gras/

(look nigga!!)

You know that I will never fall/
And if I do,I'll get up grabbin my ballz/
Middle finger to tha world!,put tha other one up/
Then slide it in ya girl!,yea you know how I fuck/

If you lookin for that dope then niggaz wassup/
You aint gotta tell me shit..I know that I'm nice busta/
I get mo white girl head than lice muthafucka!!


Chorus

there ya go..i dont remember who made tha beat but it did come from a sound click head....peace!!!

Hook-Ok,but not all that catchy and shit.Seemed half assed.Like nobody put any thought into it.
And your flow was on the beat.But it was simple.You had that "stop and go" flow.Nothing really special about that.And your lyrics were the biggest problem.You tried to include some wordplay in there,but it was all basic and done before.Like,take more shots than white girls,shit is played.All you spoke about was guns,sex,murder..shit is played.

Upp your creativity..