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Old 12-26-05, 04:08 AM   #1
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JustUs ft. David.E

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the third joint in my music section...

feel free to listen to others...

First Verse - Me, Truth
Second Verse - David.E
Third Verse - Me,Truth

Just a lil joint we did somethin a lil fun...but wud da hell...jus give ya opinions..and i am a trill ass chic so watch ya MOUF !!!!

-Truth-
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Old 12-26-05, 04:15 AM   #2
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Old 12-26-05, 06:18 AM   #3
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Old 12-26-05, 12:40 PM   #4
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I love that beat...from Biggie's joint


but...the beat sorta drowned your vocals

truth, are u a female? sounds like it

pretty good flow...vocals too low though


2nd verse...wasn't feelin dude's flow, kinda jerky


the talkin after his verse was inaudible


3rd verse...feelin the flow...nice rhymes


vocals need to be tweaked tho


not bad


keep droppin



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P.S. The talkin at the end was needless
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