Battle Rules:

6 - 10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 02-01-06 at 08:34 PM

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Tech Skillz has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-01-06 08:05 PM.

rexless has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-01-06 08:08 PM.

Im a beast in text-cee, tech skillz is lame n no other
My game-boy is advance..you still living with no color
Your only known in a battle site and school, no
"national" push
while the "U.S.C-"me like Reggie Bush
why you lookin’ for talent? you not an agency
this is my house and I don’t stand for vagrancy
You's a cheap "Mind Freak", my lines'll "Criss" cross & m"Angel" you
cuz I've determined your whole S(hits) WAC like Grambling & Prairie View
and this battle’s gettin’ old, so I’m on my way
with this cat ready to fold like it was laundry day

whipin the dust off

thanks for playing

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Rexless? Shit I'll Slap More Bars On You Than Judges In Court
How You Iller Than Me...When You Lines Shut Down You Callin Tech Support!
You Ain't Dope....Everything You Come Close To Drop Is Worthless
Rexless Couldn't Raise The bar.......If He Has Verizon's Spoke Person!
Tryin To Holla At Crews But Nobody Will Take You...You're Too Wack
Your So Old....You Couldn't Hit Your Roots....If Your Hair Grew Back!
All He Do Is Act Like He'll Hit You But Goes Back Like His Avy's Replayed Motion
But He Ain't Inactive.....It's Just Everyone Told Him To Stop Posting!

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Voted For: Tech Skillz

hmmm this is kinda 1 sided... TS had the better punches, better personals, better structure... and teh better flow, with a far more complex rhyme scheme... I'm kinda surprised rex came so weak considering he did much better in his battle verse me... oh well

Opener: TS (liked teh tech support line)
Closer: TS (Rex's was played)
Punches: TS
Personals: TS (the crew line was the best personal in the battle)
Vocab: TS
Complexity: TS
Creativity: TS (Rex had a couple of forced lines)

Vote: TS

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thanks for the vote....uppin for more votes.........

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Voted For: Tech Skillz

ok both of you need to wrok on structure rex's was all over and techs lines were stretched every single one of them thats ur major downfall tech
roflmao at opener not a diss but a tight ass pounch owned his own verse tech support thats a classic closer wasnt feelign it and no one an see his avy so ya
hair line is wack
ok rex
you had a few hot lines really im not going to hate ur jsut rusty id liek to see a rematch when u start writing more often no doubt

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thanks for the vote willa.................uppin for more votes

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uppin this thread to try and get some more votes to finish this quickly..........

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Voted For: Tech Skillz

Rexless? Shit I'll Slap More Bars On You Than Judges In Court
How You Iller Than Me...When You Lines Shut Down You Callin Tech Support!
-1st line shitty and played, 2nd OK
You Ain't Dope....Everything You Come Close To Drop Is Worthless
Rexless Couldn't Raise The bar.......If He Has Verizon's Spoke Person!
-nice set up for a nice punch
Tryin To Holla At Crews But Nobody Will Take You...You're Too Wack
Your So Old....You Couldn't Hit Your Roots....If Your Hair Grew Back!
-alright punch, consider rewording
All He Do Is Act Like He'll Hit You But Goes Back Like His Avy's Replayed Motion
But He Ain't Inactive.....It's Just Everyone Told Him To Stop Posting!
-meh, alright closer

overall there was some decent similies in here, punches were abit above average, nothing too special though, wordplay needed work, flow was pretty decent, try and throw in some more personals...

Im a beast in text-cee, tech skillz is lame n no other
My game-boy is advance..you still living with no color
-trying too hard to be complex, simplify
Your only known in a battle site and school, no
"national" push
while the "U.S.C-"me like Reggie Bush
-i didnt get this punch, dunno what a usc is or a reggie bush..
why you lookin’ for talent? you not an agency
this is my house and I don’t stand for vagrancy
-what the fuck is vagrancy?
You's a cheap "Mind Freak", my lines'll "Criss" cross & m"Angel" you
cuz I've determined your whole S(hits) WAC like Grambling & Prairie View
-grambling? whats with the "angel" just put mangle...???!?
and this battle’s gettin’ old, so I’m on my way
with this cat ready to fold like it was laundry day
-only similie you had

overall you need lots of work on punches, similies, personals, flow, wordplay etc. you really need to simplify your verse... it seems like you're trying too hard to think of punches that you get too complex and nobody understands it...just let it come naturally

v/tech for an allaround better verse

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Voted For: Tech Skillz

opener: tech
closer: tech
flow: tech
punches: tech

battle was pretty weak but fairly onesided

vote: tech

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thanks for the votes....uppin to finish this shit.............

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