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Old 01-01-06, 07:40 PM   #1
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N.O.K.- Self titled Track (N.O.K.)

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aight peep dis leave some serious Feedback...
next track already has alot of better punches but peep lemme know what u think aight? aight

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Old 01-01-06, 10:21 PM   #2
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kid on the intro needs a pop filter


I like the beat

ur flow is fine...delivery is lackluster

some decent line...rhyming needs to step up though


not bad for what it is


AHhhhhhhhhhhhhhh...so THAT'S how you pronounce your NAME!!

Hook isn't bad dawg


decent track



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Old 01-01-06, 10:44 PM   #3
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ahah fucker i alwayz tell u damnit!! ahah anywayz

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Old 01-02-06, 07:33 AM   #4
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Aight

Intros Aight.......

Beat...

Aight

Flows Koo

Deliverys Koo

Presence Is Koo,Seem Confident

Claritys Aight,Could Be Worked On

Emotions Kooo

Lyrics Koo

Hooks Nice,Catchy

NOK!!!!!!!!!!lol

V2:Lol @Chicken Pox Line

Same As 1st Verse Really Exept Lyrics Better Lol...


Hook Weeerrrd

SO SICK,CANT TOUCH ME,Wooop!!!!!!!!lol

Good

Overall Good Track Work On Ya Quality Tho Lol

Please Rtf-http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=218655
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