got at this kid on his own beat that he used against me.................and pwned him for a second time bitc wouldnt keep it on hush
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pag...m?bandID=472818




http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=220007
lik to shiief^^^^^^^^^
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=219955
unf^^^^^

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That beats tight as hell.....you had nice flow, i put this shit on my mp3, the intro is nice and catchy. lol, this shit was nice, good structure on your verse and your disses were good.....nice diss fam

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Aigghh

beats dope lol

BOW THE FUCK DOWN



hooks doooooooopeee

delvierys koo,dope

flows nice

loool@punches hahaha

they dope

the hooks better qual than the verse

presence is koo

LMAO@family members


LOOOOOOL@Bed linen track


Hook againn!!!!!!!


Overall:8/10

HOW THE FUCK U IMPROVE SOOOO QUICK

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OYD MAFIA

bumpity........................................... ....................................
thanx fer feed apreciate it

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Word up that beat was sick!The delivery was pretty nice, the hook was sick i was really feeling it , your first verse was tight , your flor was also good ..i was really feeling this drop ..keep it up

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the beat is a west coast classic....the intro/hook but it's a little to long maybe if u just said it two times....the flow seems imo a little shaky maybe it's the delivery....it's smooth but sounds like it can be smoother....punches seemed to have a lot of personals...i think u should of had more of a verse instead of kicking another chorus after your first verse. this was a decent diss nice work

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werd thanx fer tha feed uppin

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hmmmm the intro was too long... the hook was aight too many repetitions though... Ya flow was aight, the punches were not that hot though... you had the emotion, but lyrically the punches just weren't that cleaver or hard hitting... shit's cool for just a dis track though... I wouldn't use it in a battle though...

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it was a personal battle..................i dissed him b4 then he responded wikt this beat
i just mocked his verse by clownin all his personalz
werd thanx

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2nd link is invalid feedback so fix it or drop a new one thank you

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