this is another song, that i made my own verses 2.
enjoy.

song-remember the name by fort minor.


intro.

10% luck
20% skill
15% concentrated power of will
5% pleasure
50% pain
100% to remember my name.

verse.

remember my name, when i take my walk 2 fame.
its all for the money and the love of the game.
rhyming for life, rhymin' with brutality.
all of my dreams of become a reality.
but i dont need my name in the light.
i rhyme cus im good, and wut a delight.
when ppl know who i am, and see that im good.
skillz are so wicked and so understood.
i just want to tell my story, and express my glory.
when i beat ppl in battles they come out all gory*.
but i do it for the love. 2 show wut im made of.
me and rapping click, like a hand and a glove.
a mirical from above. flyin like a dove.
flyin so high, way up in the sky.
rappin so fast, life just flys by.
but i dont want fame, i dont need money.
i rap cus i can, why is that so funny?
i dont need 2 be a star. dont need 20 cars.
i am who i am and u are who u are.
i keep it real, i dont need 2 steal.
i got life good, it sounds unreal.
so remember my name. its all over the game.
rappin is my life, and its not for the fame.



10% luck
20% skill
15% concentrated power of will
5% pleasure
50% pain
100% to remember my name.

Verse.

im rightin this verse off the top of my mind.
and this is 50% better then my raps combind.
and i try 2 have it laid out b4 i spit a rhyme.
when i rap i aint got nuttin but my own time.
and i have 2 have it played b4 i write a line.
before i touch a key and before i do a grind.
i have 2 have this shit all down in my mind.
and ppl askin me why i have no time.
cus im devoted 2 my raps, and makin nu rhymes.
making new raps for the shake of mankind.
ill make sure u remember my name in the back of ur mind.
like i said, it aint for fame, and i aint gonna sign.
dont want a record deal. this is my design.
dont need a patient for this verse or line.
cus its 100% mine o mine!!!!

10% luck
20% skill
15% concentrated power of will
5% pleasure
50% pain
100% to remember my name.


yall ppl dont know who i am, and i know i dont talk much.
but off the rhymes i throw im leavin u star struck.
leavin u confused and up in a daze. ima do this here, all in my way.
leavin u a stray, pitched way to the side.
fallin in u chair, got u washed up and dryed.
but i aint here for fame, its for the love of the game.
i dont got 2 pay ppl 2 shout my name.
but i still remain the newkid on the block.
shovin that glock and makin my way 2 the top.
i know wut i got, and i dont need more.
i got better rhymes now, way better then before.
but yall still got a long way 2 know me.
knowin that may skillz are way beyond reach.
and that my skillz are those of an artist.


10% luck
20% skill
15% concentrated power of will
5% pleasure
50% pain
100% to remember my name.

u wont believe tha shit that comes out of my throat.
i got ppl every where and they all equaly dope.
ppl sayin im a prick and ppl say im a cock.
girls wanna b with me, and ppl wish i get shot.
but that aint gonna happen not in this life time.
cus theres somthin protectin me and thats my rhmyes.
cus through each line i bring somethin new to the world.
somethin not just for me but them boys n girls.
those who love me, and dont wanna see me go.
just breakin it down in 3 different language modes.
english, latin, and spanish too.
and i do it 3 times the rhyme and its all for u.
the ppl who made me, cus they know wut i am.
and i know they love me cus they know i can.
i can bring ill beats to the streets in a day.
i make more in a week then u in a months pay.
but it aint about money, and it aint about fame.
its all about u remembering my name!!!


S to the Z.


this is wut i call ART!!
if u dont like it then u can bounce and make somethin better...

decent drop.. rolls mo like a poem if nething.. good still

stay1

pz

LMAO..Didnt you take that chorus off the NBA live 06 game?

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wtf u talkin' bout morph? it is a song i got and i like the beat... look it up, fort minor. and if i did i would say so cus i aint no liar and i got nuttin 2 hide, so there.

want some feed ppl, dont sleep on this shit!

I like your flow, but you need to be more creative with yours, like put more funny stuff in there, it'll catch eyes

Know what i'm saying?

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im the ILLEST

it was pretty good....some bars were too short in my opinion...but keep droppin em...

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alright ppl this shit is DONE!!! so get to it and start bringin feed!!

drop some shit someone!!!!!
dont leave this shit hangin

lol yea didnt u get that off of nba 06?

where i live (nicaragua) i dont get that shit, but i guess its the same song. no biggie.

i want some fuckin feed ppl! dont be sleepin and droolin on this shit!!

i like it...im lookin for tha beat to dis track so i can do my own shit...diggin tha flow and if im correct, it goes perfect wit tha beat...hot shit man, stay up...and peep my shit to return tha fav...easy

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yer i liked this piece,,, flowed nicely,,,as mentioned above ^^
the hook was creativ therefore catchy
need a bit mor higher volcab use

overall yer ...liked it

xcept one thing........... we mor need posts on deep stuff like worldy issues/problems/urself
insted of tht classic, imma do this imma do that.....which cn get borin frm time to tym

overall , u gt this in tight ,,,,,,,, uppin for a 8.6

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