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02-27-06, 07:01 PM
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I don't lose
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The intro to Uppin' the Stakes: Mixtape Vol. 1
IP: 9C2B 06EC
simply stated this is an intro....my man keef in on the first and third...n i blaze the second verse....his are both freestyles...mine was but i messed up like 3 lines....so i wrote the free down and spit it....so, sorta a true freestyle intro....the mixtape is comin real quick, one weekend and we already got 6 tracks completed and mixed...im lookin for someone who wants to do the graphic for the cover...holla at me if you want to.....
INTRO - http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=3559851 http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2671705 http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2671721 i send feedback on your shit...so hit me back on mine....peace
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 well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything so i took my old man's advice three sad semesters it was only fifteen grand spent in bed i thought about the army i dropped out and joined a band instead  |
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02-28-06, 12:33 PM
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IP: 9C2B 06EC
can i get some feedback??
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything so i took my old man's advice three sad semesters it was only fifteen grand spent in bed i thought about the army i dropped out and joined a band instead |
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02-28-06, 12:55 PM
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Bann The Deed NOT The Breed
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IP: 369E C8BC
beat ok used a lot lol Idk why but u remind me of nas a tiny little bit I would never download this because your emotion is so blaaaaaaah no emotion at all lyrics you told a story ok nothing great really a few corny lines in my opinion flow was pretty boring
2nd guy emotion is good a lot better than first guy flow isn’t boring like first guy lyrics were so so 1st guy again you have decent lyrics you just really need to up your emotion and your flow and take more time writing your lyrics you got a few dope lines than I hear a few wack ones outro should be upped on the volume a little production could be upped also overall I I heard this song and was asked if I wanted to buy a cd id say hell no I think you guys need to go all out on the intro song
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02-28-06, 02:04 PM
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IP: E8B4 945F
yeah same firts guy is not good at all...seriously alot of those lines were mad corney went to the bar and spent 7gs no he didnt ...
hurry up i'm sicka this first guy aight... here comes jay there it is .... ill shit.. good flow good delivery and good lyrics...mulits were dope and so was quality... good work on this one.. ur verse 7/10 keef 510
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02-28-06, 03:31 PM
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IP: 9C2B 06EC
yo serioulsy thanks yall....just to defend my man keef a lil...i know what yall mean with the monotanous flow, but both verses were a straight up freestyle..i sat here and watchted it...so i mean true they arent spectacular, but for a free, i think some of its pretty ill
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything so i took my old man's advice three sad semesters it was only fifteen grand spent in bed i thought about the army i dropped out and joined a band instead |
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