yo check out my song "Hear that Click Clack" and holla at me and let me know wat you think of it. I really need some feedback to see if Im missing anything from a commercial point of veiw. you can also check out a few other tracks Im on up in there. Thatz that real miami heat niggaz. cheah.

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more more more emotion on the hook...this like a southern style banger beat you gotta loud on dat hook... let em fuckin know...first verse is cool i like this style this is more of my type of hip hop music than the rest of this site... shits ill.. just work on that hook...and shit will be fire... hit me up on aim for collabo sometime = accomplishmentdv and try to rtf on mafia stylin track...

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yo thanks dawg. I feel you on the hook part. I was honestly more worried about my verse. Im on the first verse of that track. the 2nd is my producer nigga. he makes some str8 beats. I cant aim you but we could get on a text collab if you down wit it.

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figure I could drop by and promote my my first mixtape and what not since im here..

im actually listenin in hi-fi lol (jsut got hi-speed)..

...likin the beat.....werd, have soem more emotion on the hook....gotta nice voice, lyrics could be upped but i see wut vibe your goin for so its coo....this is a nice trakk so far mayne...hook is a little too quiet...second verse, same critiques as the first verse....we might have to collab yall, lol....werd nice trakk tho