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http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2671020

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2671043
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this is probably one of my best trax LYRICAL wize...alot of consistant rhyming and alot of switch up in the flow...personally i like it and i did get some props on this track by people offline so hopefully peeps feel this as much as other people have

LEAVE ya linkz and ill hit ya up wit feedback

www.soundclick.com/nokshuz

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this the first time i heard u spit...voice is raw, i like it, the beat is iight, not really my type tho...you flow pretty good this beat tho, nice lyrics...good devlivery but i feel like there could be some mroe emotion on it...this sogn is decent, i would have to say the oly things i would change on this trakk would be the amount of emotion, and the shorus (not feelin the chrous, lol)...nice job tho homie

could ya rtf
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=222977

Beat isn't bad

voice sounds good on the track

flow is on...maybe add some stops/starts to change it up some

hook sounds good...maybe needs more production...layer it some more


not a bad drop homie

keep spittin

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Youtube Video for my song "CARRY ON"

listening....voice is pretty coo...delivery is ok...it could be better...and i think once u master it...itll make your voice sound even better....bring it out more...flow is ok....change it up a lil more...

hook...like q said...production could be better...then itd sound a lot better...

overall this is pretty nice though...keep at it......mix better...quality was a bit ehh...

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thankz for the feedback my only problem is the mixing i do what i can ahhaha so chea if theres any tips that can help ill try...i tired Q's tips but it didnt work so well

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