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Old 03-21-06, 02:27 AM   #1
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Talking zEro XK - Feelin' On Fire ft. Da BlinGz

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Artist: zEro XK
Song: Feelin' On Fire ft. Da BlinGz
Producer: Rock It Productions


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Chorus: zEro XK
First Verse: zEro XK
Second Verse: Da BlinGz
Third Verse: zEro XK


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Old 03-21-06, 08:11 AM   #2
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beat is eh.....fits the feel for the song at least.....flow is good.....lyrics could be improved a tad....the hook is kinda annoying.....decent drop though 7.5/10
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Old 03-21-06, 06:16 PM   #3
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are you british?

the effect on the hook is annoying...but the hook itself is cool

1st cat...flow is on well...not really focused on your lyrics...but your delivery fits the beat...

the hook comes back in after 6 bars...or 8 bars...sup wit dat?

Hook is def. good

2nd cat...vocals kinda drowned out...flow is not bad



pretty coo drop fellas


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Old 03-21-06, 08:26 PM   #4
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listenin...

...hook is nice 1st-good flow good delivery and emotion...2nd-need a lil more emotion,lyrics=ehh...flow is good tho and voice sounds good on beat....3rd-fflow needs work on a few spots good delivery but need some emotion....ocne again hook is nice....

notta bad drop, actually pretty good....keep it up
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Old 03-23-06, 07:36 AM   #5
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iight im listenin....

lol me and my boy Di been ripped this beat fam....chorus i aint really feelin..good quality and nice flow its on point, but you shoulda lowered the beat a bit more...too short of a verse...2nd cat sounds good...sounds like a young FAB...ya 8th bar came in alil soft spoken and weak you shoulda kept that hard flow you came in wit fam...iight the 3rd cat has a good voice but sounds like hes chantin a spell speakin so mysterious and shit..lol might be just me...he was iight not all that but decent...but this is a decent track kid i'll give it a 8.5/10 holla..1ne..


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